C&C Please

Sam · Nov-04-2009, 05:35 PM

OK junk or artistic?

Be honest................don't sugar coat it. OK you can sprinkle a little sugar on top.

Sam

adbsgicom · Nov-04-2009, 05:48 PM

I think its an interesting take. Not my particular taste, but I think it has a distinct vibe, and could find appeal. I think you could take this look and perhaps broaden the appeal based on the tones and texture. This felt pretty metalic because of the grey/blue; perhaps something in the browns would make it more an embossed leather feel. Keep on playing with it, I think it has legs.

SoCalAl · Nov-04-2009, 06:12 PM

I like the processing/pastels. Something a little different and I keep looking straight into this guy's eyes... He is definitely looking back at me.

James H · Nov-04-2009, 08:26 PM

Hi Sam. I wont call it junk, but I don't think I'd call it art either.

The guy has a distinctive look, and I think you captured that very well. I'm confused however by your chosen treatment. The strange colors and faux distressing ruin what is otherwise a perfectly good image, IMHO.

I did a quick sepia conversion, to get past the awful mix of colors, and I liked that look much better, but the texture was still too much to ignore. I guess I just don't see where the chosen texture enhances the image in any way.

I also liked Andrews suggestion about an embossed leather look. That might work better with the subject and the existing background. And like he said, keep messing with it, you're working with a strong foundation.

EarthDog · Nov-06-2009, 10:30 AM

I think it's definitely artistic, but whether it's successful or not, I can't say. It depends on what response you were hoping to evoke.

It's a very compelling portrait, but the cluttered surrounding distract from it. If that was your motivation for the effects you applied, I don't think it worked. I think tight vignetting and/or blurring would be more effective and not as distracting.

If you wanted to convey that the subject is somehow far more unusual than he might ordinarily appear, I think you're on track. The effects do provoke a response, but is it the one you want?

Sam · Nov-06-2009, 11:02 AM

Hi,

I must admit I am just playing around attempting to exaggerate the character on the face. I am not looking for any particular feed back other than what you honestly think.

Another set of eyes with a different viewpoint is invaluable.

Here is the original version, which I like, but the portraitee doesn't like.

No problem at all. If he doesn't like it he doesn't like it.

I did modify the heavy processed one to remove much of the blue.

I do thank all who commented!!!!

Sam

Sam · Nov-06-2009, 11:03 AM

Last attempt at the altered look.

Nov-04-2009, 05:35 PM	#1
Sam San Jose CA Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 3,735	C&C Please OK junk or artistic? Be honest................don't sugar coat it. OK you can sprinkle a little sugar on top. Sam Attached Images __________________ www.samlinvillephotography.com

Nov-04-2009, 05:48 PM	#2
adbsgicom Texas-Sized Grins Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Austin, Texas Posts: 2,915	I think its an interesting take. Not my particular taste, but I think it has a distinct vibe, and could find appeal. I think you could take this look and perhaps broaden the appeal based on the tones and texture. This felt pretty metalic because of the grey/blue; perhaps something in the browns would make it more an embossed leather feel. Keep on playing with it, I think it has legs. __________________ - Andrew Who is wise? He who learns from everyone. My SmugMug Site

Nov-04-2009, 06:12 PM	#3
SoCalAl Big grins Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 34	I like the processing/pastels. Something a little different and I keep looking straight into this guy's eyes... He is definitely looking back at me. __________________ Al http://alsphotoprojects.smugmug.com/ Each image is a unique fraction of a second of life.... Never happened before.... never happen again.... no duplicates!!! Nikon D80, D300, D3, Nikon 18-200, 24-70 & 70-200 VRII, 50 f1.8... waiting for a TC-20 III

Nov-04-2009, 08:26 PM	#4
James H Big grins Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: North Carolina Posts: 92	Hi Sam. I wont call it junk, but I don't think I'd call it art either. The guy has a distinctive look, and I think you captured that very well. I'm confused however by your chosen treatment. The strange colors and faux distressing ruin what is otherwise a perfectly good image, IMHO. I did a quick sepia conversion, to get past the awful mix of colors, and I liked that look much better, but the texture was still too much to ignore. I guess I just don't see where the chosen texture enhances the image in any way. I also liked Andrews suggestion about an embossed leather look. That might work better with the subject and the existing background. And like he said, keep messing with it, you're working with a strong foundation. __________________ --James Homepage - James Hill Photography

Nov-06-2009, 10:30 AM	#5
EarthDog Major grins Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Sheltering from the heat Posts: 119	I think it's definitely artistic, but whether it's successful or not, I can't say. It depends on what response you were hoping to evoke. It's a very compelling portrait, but the cluttered surrounding distract from it. If that was your motivation for the effects you applied, I don't think it worked. I think tight vignetting and/or blurring would be more effective and not as distracting. If you wanted to convey that the subject is somehow far more unusual than he might ordinarily appear, I think you're on track. The effects do provoke a response, but is it the one you want? __________________ Once upon a time, they all lived happily ever after.

Nov-06-2009, 11:02 AM	#6
Sam San Jose CA Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 3,735	Hi, I must admit I am just playing around attempting to exaggerate the character on the face. I am not looking for any particular feed back other than what you honestly think. Another set of eyes with a different viewpoint is invaluable. Here is the original version, which I like, but the portraitee doesn't like. No problem at all. If he doesn't like it he doesn't like it. I did modify the heavy processed one to remove much of the blue. I do thank all who commented!!!! Sam Attached Images __________________ www.samlinvillephotography.com

Nov-06-2009, 11:03 AM	#7
Sam San Jose CA Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 3,735	Last attempt at the altered look. Attached Images __________________ www.samlinvillephotography.com

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