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torags · Jun-24-2012, 06:08 PM #1

MarkR · Jun-26-2012, 06:26 AM #2

Well, I'll comment!

It looks like a street with a lot of character-- reminds me of the wonderful drawings the late Will Eisner drew in his brooklyn comics.

I do think that the bottom 1/5 of the image isn't adding anything dramatic, and cropping it out might make the image stronger.

torags · Jun-26-2012, 06:34 PM #3

Thanks for the comments Mark, much appreciated.

Space in front of walker, is the result of an old convention; leave space in front of direction of subject motion (perhaps I left too much)

torags · Jun-26-2012, 06:41 PM #4

there you go; it looks better

jiro · Jun-26-2012, 08:09 PM #5

I agree with the edited version. It looks more engaging. Nice work!

torags · Jun-27-2012, 08:15 AM #6

thanks Jiro & Mark


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Jun-24-2012, 06:08 PM #1
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Jun-26-2012, 06:26 AM #2
MarkR Accused Shill. Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 2,096	Well, I'll comment! It looks like a street with a lot of character-- reminds me of the wonderful drawings the late Will Eisner drew in his brooklyn comics. I do think that the bottom 1/5 of the image isn't adding anything dramatic, and cropping it out might make the image stronger.

Jun-26-2012, 06:34 PM #3
torags ^OP Major grins Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 2,929	Thanks for the comments Mark, much appreciated. Space in front of walker, is the result of an old convention; leave space in front of direction of subject motion (perhaps I left too much) __________________ Rags I don't know the heroes... I just take pictures

Jun-26-2012, 06:41 PM #4
torags ^OP Major grins Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 2,929	there you go; it looks better __________________ Rags I don't know the heroes... I just take pictures

Jun-26-2012, 08:09 PM #5
jiro observer Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Manila, Philippines Posts: 1,865	I agree with the edited version. It looks more engaging. Nice work! __________________ Sitting quietly, doing nothing. Spring comes and the grass grows by itself. http://imagesbyjirobau.blogspot.com/ http://500px.com/williebau

Jun-27-2012, 08:15 AM #6
torags ^OP Major grins Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 2,929	thanks Jiro & Mark __________________ Rags I don't know the heroes... I just take pictures


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