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rogerchester · Aug-18-2012, 07:17 AM #1

I still need more practice.

<a href="http://r-prescott.smugmug.com/Portraits/Lexingtonkyseniorphotos/22842750_nvvxVf#!i=2032494624&k=SX8Cdmd&lb=1&s=A" title=""><img src="http://r-prescott.smugmug.com/Portraits/Lexingtonkyseniorphotos/i-SX8Cdmd/0/L/IMG8351-L.jpg" title="" alt=""></a>

Quincy T · Aug-18-2012, 09:01 AM #2

The light is really present, but the face strikes me as strange...did you do some adjusting there specifically? It's a nice image, though, Roger. Hope Lexington is treating you well...my favorite city from my home state!

joshhuntnm · Aug-21-2012, 07:35 PM #3

closing down the aperture would make the model pop of the background a bit more.

zoomer · Aug-22-2012, 05:20 AM #4

The pose looks a bit awkward there is a doorway coming out of your models head, the background could be blurred more to make your subject pop.
On the bright side your model look comfortable in the face and you got a nice look from the model.
Next time use a bigger aperture, pick a noncompeting background, try to make your models face the brightest part of the photo (that is where the eye goes first).
We all need more practice :).


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Aug-18-2012, 07:17 AM #1
rogerchester ^OP Big grins Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: lexington Ky Posts: 86	Senior from this week I still need more practice. <a href="http://r-prescott.smugmug.com/Portraits/Lexingtonkyseniorphotos/22842750_nvvxVf#!i=2032494624&k=SX8Cdmd&lb=1&s=A" title=""><img src="http://r-prescott.smugmug.com/Portraits/Lexingtonkyseniorphotos/i-SX8Cdmd/0/L/IMG8351-L.jpg" title="" alt=""></a> __________________ canon 40D EF70- 200mm 1:2.8 l is usm EF28-135mm F3.5-5.6 IS USM

Aug-18-2012, 09:01 AM #2
Quincy T from ear to ear Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 1,076	The light is really present, but the face strikes me as strange...did you do some adjusting there specifically? It's a nice image, though, Roger. Hope Lexington is treating you well...my favorite city from my home state! __________________

Aug-21-2012, 07:35 PM #3
joshhuntnm Las Cruces, NM Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Las Cruces, NM Posts: 1,653	closing down the aperture would make the model pop of the background a bit more. __________________ Josh Las Cruces Photographer Las Cruces Wedding Photographer www.joshhunt.com Photography How-to

Aug-22-2012, 05:20 AM #4
zoomer Major grins Join Date: May 2005 Location: Boise Idaho Posts: 3,476	The pose looks a bit awkward there is a doorway coming out of your models head, the background could be blurred more to make your subject pop. On the bright side your model look comfortable in the face and you got a nice look from the model. Next time use a bigger aperture, pick a noncompeting background, try to make your models face the brightest part of the photo (that is where the eye goes first). We all need more practice :). __________________ -------------- Mike Reid, Boise Portrait Photographer www.facebook.com/mike.reid.330 alloutdoor.smugmug.com http://aoboudoirboise.smugmug.com/


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