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rookie taking photos in Boston

afermanaferman Registered Users Posts: 6 Beginner grinner
edited October 4, 2015 in Street and Documentary
looking for some feedback as I go through this journey of learning photography!

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    ThelensspotThelensspot Registered Users Posts: 2,041 Major grins
    edited October 3, 2015
    Welcome to Dgrin!
    It's a nice street scene with some complimentary diagonals!
    I like the B&W here.
    "Photography is partly art and partly science. Really good photography adds discipline, sacrifice and a never ending pursuit of photographic excellence"...ziggy53

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    afermanaferman Registered Users Posts: 6 Beginner grinner
    edited October 3, 2015
    Thelensspot wrote: »
    Welcome to Dgrin!
    It's a nice street scene with some complimentary diagonals!
    I like the B&W here.

    Thank you for the feedback. I am looking forward to getting lots of critiques and ideas from you all.
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    rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited October 4, 2015
    Welcome to DGrin!

    Well composed shot. Like his look of boredom and cigar in mouth.

    Processing can use some work. It is really flat in contrast. Try brightening the exposure. Note the white has a flat gray look and the blacks lose detail completely.
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    afermanaferman Registered Users Posts: 6 Beginner grinner
    edited October 4, 2015
    rainbow wrote: »
    Welcome to DGrin!

    Well composed shot. Like his look of boredom and cigar in mouth.

    Processing can use some work. It is really flat in contrast. Try brightening the exposure. Note the white has a flat gray look and the blacks lose detail completely.


    Thank you for checking my picture out and giving some feedback.

    is this closer to what you are getting at? I played with the levels a little and reposted it here.
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    RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,918 moderator
    edited October 4, 2015
    Hi there and welcome to Dgrin wave.gif. Interesting character. I think I might have moved some so as to get his face from the front, if that had been possible. As for the processing, the rework is a little better in that the tee shirt no longer unduly attracts the eye, but the blacks have suffered and the contrast is still not very strong. A curve will give you more control than levels. Keep at it. thumb.gif
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