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alaios · November 26, 2014

Thanks for the feedback

Regards
Alex

Richard · November 26, 2014

Almost. It would be better if you cropped/cloned the bird on the lower left out, but even at that, nothing is really in sharp focus.

willard3 · November 27, 2014

Is sharp focus the point here?

I like the sense of motion.

I would clone out the stray piece of bird, lower left, too.

alaios · November 27, 2014

Hi,
I find very intresting your comments and especially that you agree in removing the bird on the left side. For me it gives more background information. So what I did is to go back and do some edits. I can see your comment about removing the bird at the left.. I just wonder how did you think about it? When the extra element adds in the confusion and when it adds more in the story of the background?

Regards
Alex
P.S The newer edits below

#1

#2

#3

#4

Jack'll do · November 29, 2014

I think removing the lower left bird is a good idea for the following reasons. First it is not immediately recognizable as a bird and secondly the viewers eye is pulled to it and lingers trying to figure out what it is. Of the newer edits I prefer #3 because (to my eyes) the white background makes the smaller bird look more in focus than the blueish background.

alaios · November 30, 2014

thanks for the nice answer

Alex

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