Come on, vogue by Street Vision L.A. (off during the week), on Flickr

Like the shot but not a flattering pose for her.

Originally Posted by Hackbone Like the shot but not a flattering pose for her.

Thank you. She did not know she was posing. She was just standing there so I shot her

Originally Posted by Javier Thank you. She did not know she was posing. She was just standing there so I shot her

It totally works that that it isn't a "flattering" angle. edgier proccessing and vignette might work here.

I think this works as a street shot but it could be a lot stronger with a tighter crop. The text at the bottom of the frame draws my eyes away from the subject. On the other hand, the "Tattoo" sign in the background is good and adds to the photo, but gets a little lost in the background with all the stuff going on at the bottom of the photo. I tried a different crop and I think it's stronger this way:



Hope you don't mind, I'll take it down if you want. Just figured it would be easier to show what I was suggesting rather than only describing it.

I like the original crop much better. the lettering at bottom left adds asymmetrical symmetry (if that makes sense) to the shot and I like her shoes!

Yeah, I like it the way it is. Great catch.

I will not judge the model as we are all given something by mother nature , some more , some less. As a portret, I tend to say "no that is not it " However as street photography , I say "love-it".. It reminds me a bit of "Streetview".

Love it. I think she's quite lovely as is.

I wouldn't change a thing. Not everyone looks like a model (and nobody stands like one in real life).

Thanks for the comments folks. Sorry for the delay as well.
Work has me super busy.

Originally Posted by BrettDeutsch I wouldn't change a thing. Not everyone looks like a model (and nobody stands like one in real life).

+1