E-session

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It's been a long while since I've posted, but I decided it was time to seek c&c from those that know much more than I. This is my second e-session, so any help you can offer is much appreciated.

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r3t1awr3yd

#1 is killer
A great capture of emotion!

Kinkajou

Eeeeek!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE #1!!!! LOOOOOOOVE IT!

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Thanks so much for the comments. They are very appreciated.

SuicidnS13

I feel her eyes are a BIT overprocessed. All I want to do is look at her pupils. Even in the B/W's. But maybe that is what the client or you felt was best for the edits. I love number 1!!!! Awesome work overall...

nicimarie

ah #1 is breathtaking!!!!! In #4 I just wish their shoes weren't cut off! Beautiful work!

tenoverthenose

Holy processing! The eyes are teeth in most of them are way over done to me. My take on most porcessing is that if you can tell it was done, there was too much done. Great emotion connection with the couple!

#1. Her teeth distract from the rest of the photo - they really draw your eyes down to them and away from the connection between the couple.

#2 Dark eye makeup + ultra bright eyes look a bit scary to me. Watch her hand and elbow. The pink flowers in the background are distract and the composition is a bit too centered. I assume #5 is a recrop of this?

#3 I think this would look stronger without the heavy vignette. Also watch out when shooting straight into brick walls - you can easily tell if you are not level or not shooting straight on.

#4 They are not into this pose at all - they look awkward. I love the modern architecture at the top of the frame, but it doesn't match the bottom of the frame. I would get down low, put them in the top of the frame with a long lens and fire away. Great location.

#5 Similar to 32 , but I like this much better

#6 Needs more contrast and warmth. Also watch the grooms ear - I would crop it out altogether.