My first few portrait sessions

dreamcometrue · May 15, 2009

Hey everyone. Here are a few from some recent shootings. C&C welcome. Thanks in advance.:D
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GemGem · May 15, 2009

So sweet! #3 &#4 are my faves!
GG

Qarik · May 15, 2009

you have captured the moments, expressions, feeling very well. I can feel their personalities through the pictures.

There are a few techinical issues which are little more then nits:

1) subject is bit soft..that bat handle looks in focus!
2) seems a bit underexposed to my taste
4) fill light is touch harsh
6) her hair color in this shot is different then 5.

AngryRed · May 15, 2009

I hate to say it but the first thing I notice on each is the watermark. The shots are great but the font is too eye catching for my liking.

Aside from that the comp on the 1st and 3rd is wonderful and I really how the effect works with the expression on the 5th. The top of the 6th is a bit overdone IMHO though.

rwells · May 16, 2009

Looks like your off to a good start.

#3 & #4 are my favorites.

Looking forward to seeing more of your work

joshhuntnm · May 16, 2009

all good. The only one I don't like is #4. the expression kills it. The rest are great!

dreamcometrue · May 16, 2009

Thanks for the kind words everyone. I just went out and got a new dome diffuser and 41'' reflector 5 in 1. It will be nice to see what effect those items have on my shots:D

My first few portrait sessions

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