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A bun

heatherfeatherheatherfeather Registered Users Posts: 2,738 Major grins
edited November 20, 2009 in Street and Documentary
Thought this candid was super fun. Love the expressions.

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    FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2009
    Fun candid, Heather!! It definitely captures the moment. I might try a square crop to bring the ladies in the background closer to us. That would let the mom-to-be and her friend - both of whom are turned away from the camera - provide a frame for the other two while giving us enough information to understand their expressions.

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    thoththoth Registered Users Posts: 1,085 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2009
    I'm going to agree with Virginia here and vote for the square crop. That should bring things in nicely. I do think you've done a great job on the exposure in a pretty harsh situation, though. Yeah the background is blown and you've lost some darks in the foreground but the balance is quite nice. thumb.gif
    Travis
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    bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2009
    heatherfeather wrote:
    Thought this candid was super fun. Love the expressions.

    Wonderful capture of a mundane, yet at the same time very special, moment. And I agree with the crop suggestions. clap.gifclap.gif
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