#40 First attempt

travelways · December 21, 2009

Hi, do you think this image is good enough for this current challenge?

"Do cookies have feelings?"

What do you think? Thank you for looking,

slpollett · December 21, 2009

Cute idea! It made me laugh, so it's good for comedy. It's also tragedy because the poor little guy is missing parts. The biggest tragedy may be that I don't have one of those tasty-looking cookies to munch on myself (lol).

Sherry

WhatSheSaw · December 21, 2009

Definitely good enough. Wish I'd thought of it.

dlscott56 · December 21, 2009

Very creative and funny. Good job!

tinamarie52 · December 22, 2009

Funny. It works for me.

travelways · December 22, 2009

Thank you very much for your comments.

I made a cleaner, simpler one:

Version 2 #1

What do you think - is this better?

PS: rather this one:

Version 2 #2

dlscott56 · December 22, 2009

Personally I like the first one with the added 'tragic' elements.

travelways · December 22, 2009

dlscott56 wrote:

Personally I like the first one with the added 'tragic' elements.

Thank you Dave, hmmm...

richtersl · December 22, 2009

I prefer the straight-on angle in "cleaner simpler" version.

Don't see much of a difference between the two shots on this particular monitor, though.

Very clever take on the theme. When I saw this shot the first thing that came to mind was "Mr. Bill".

travelways · December 22, 2009

photo-bug wrote:

Thank you Dave, hmmm...

After I posted here I realized that I was not very pleased with the pp.

Here is the#2 of the first version re-done:

Any thoughts?

travelways · December 22, 2009

richtersl wrote:

I prefer the straight-on angle in "cleaner simpler" version.

Don't see much of a difference between the two shots on this particular monitor, though.

Very clever take on the theme. When I saw this shot the first thing that came to mind was "Mr. Bill".

Thank you Linda,

Now this is tough...

What do you actually mean by :"Don't see much of a difference between the two shots on this particular monitor, though."

Between which ones?

slpollett · December 22, 2009

I like that the arm & the foot were broken or bitten off in the first version. I like the 'cleaner' look of the second two you posted. Maybe if you took one from the second batch and also broke the arm that would do the trick. The ribbon hangers in the first one didn't bother me until I saw the version without.

To me, both of the pics from the second version look alike also.

I love this idea. Great job.

Sherry

travelways · December 22, 2009

slpollett wrote:

I like that the arm & the foot were broken or bitten off in the first version. I like the 'cleaner' look of the second two you posted. Maybe if you took one from the second batch and also broke the arm that would do the trick. The ribbon hangers in the first one didn't bother me until I saw the version without.

To me, both of the pics from the second version look alike also.

I love this idea. Great job.

Sherry

Thank you Sherry, I'll try this one with the broken arm :cry

redcargurl · December 22, 2009

feedback
I actually prefer the simpler version. It tells the story quite clearly.

travelways · December 22, 2009

I broke his arm

Version 2 #3

What do you guys think?

travelways · December 22, 2009

redcargurl wrote:

I actually prefer the simpler version. It tells the story quite clearly.

Thank you Erin, so a second vote for the clean and simple version

richtersl · December 22, 2009

photo-bug wrote:

Thank you Linda,

Now this is tough...

What do you actually mean by :"Don't see much of a difference between the two shots on this particular monitor, though."

Between which ones?

The ones in this post.

travelways · December 22, 2009

richtersl wrote:

The ones in this post.

I got it when Sherry said it

Thank you so much

WhatSheSaw · December 22, 2009

#3 is looking good!

travelways · December 22, 2009

WhatSheSaw wrote:

#3 is looking good!

Thank you - I think I'll go with #2

slpollett · December 22, 2009

LOVE LOVE LOVE this last one! Poor little guy with his broken arm and missing foot...

I still don't even have an idea. :cry I'm a little bit envious actually...

Sherry

travelways · December 22, 2009

slpollett wrote:

LOVE LOVE LOVE this last one! Poor little guy with his broken arm and missing foot...

I still don't even have an idea. :cry I'm a little bit envious actually...

Sherry

These things can be emotional…don’t they?

Animals and kids can make good subjects - I don't have any, and my husband thinks that there are better
things to do rather than spending too much time in the kitchen, so I bought those guys at the supermarket

I'm thinking of another shot tomorrow with only the "poor" mutilated one...

- first I wanted this image to be comic, but I see that it turns into tragic

Thank you for your help

#40 First attempt

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