#41 Trying to step it up a bit!

jeffgroves · January 6, 2010

First of all, I was confused on the deadline when I initially posted and then I got some great feedback on my "help me with the title tread", so I am trying to step it up a bit.

I still have one more idea that I want to try, but I revisited the shots from my initial shoot and would like some feedback.

I rec'd some great feedback on this initial shot that the shoes didn't stand out... blended with the floor and the focus seemed to be more on the wine. I agree.
Shot #1 - Baby, its cold outside

Here is an alternate shot with the floor masked slightly and the boots were brightened slightly. :dunno What do you think? :dunno :dunno :dunno
Shot #2- Baby, its cold outside

Thanks everyone. Although I have entered several challenges, I still consider myself a newbie to the discussions. Trying to get more involved.

Tango · January 6, 2010

#2 feels so much more natural.... IMO

anonymouscuban · January 6, 2010

#2 for sure.

travelways · January 6, 2010

I too like #2 more

Halite · January 6, 2010

#2 more completely tells the story of staying cozy in front of the fire while featuring the shoes. How about desaturating the pj pattern a bit so they compete less with the slippers?

Aspecto5 · January 6, 2010

I agree with #2. The wine and the nail polish makes me think of a higher class woman unwinding redneck style like where I'm from. I love it!

#41 Trying to step it up a bit!

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