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Anthony and Tisha

BrieyasmomBrieyasmom Registered Users Posts: 77 Big grins
edited June 14, 2010 in Weddings
Thought I would post some from a recent wedding to hear some feedback, I love getting better ideas and thoughts. I havent been on in awhile. This was just a 1 hour beach wedding. Let me know what I could do better, or any other thoughts. Thanks!

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    nicoleshillidaynicoleshilliday Registered Users Posts: 549 Major grins
    edited June 14, 2010
    from a strictly composition standpoint...

    I would watch the horizon line. Unless these were meant to be tilted i would straighten them up a little.

    I wouldn't mind a wider crop in number 4. Show us what they are looking at?

    Beautiful moment in number 2.
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    SamSam Registered Users Posts: 7,419 Major grins
    edited June 14, 2010
    First thing that jumps out at me is "that's a big guy" second, your really got the exposure. One of my photographic fears is African Americans, Caucasians and white clothing. :D

    Yours is nicely done.

    The other thing I noticed was the crops. In my opinion a little too close as a group, and you have feet heads fingers etc cropped off. I try to not crop at joints.

    1. I want to see wider and show all of the hands.

    4. I want to see more on the sides and more room at the feet.

    6. Wider and ether more on the bottom or less. Also straighten the horizon.

    Looks like a second marriage for both, and they look happy.

    These are just my thoughts.

    Sam
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