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First Engagement Shoot

tward88tward88 Registered Users Posts: 18 Big grins
edited August 19, 2010 in Weddings
A few shots from my first engagement shoot. Any C&C would be appreciated.

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Nikon D80 & D700; Alien Bees 800's; SB600's; Nikon 50mm 1.4; Tamron 28-75mm f/2.8; Tamron 70-200mm f/2.8; Tamron 90mm f/2.8 Macro

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    GitzoGitzo Registered Users Posts: 57 Big grins
    edited August 18, 2010
    Look really nice. I like the color box on the last one. Number 3 is my fav with maybe just a little bit more fill on them. Thanks for sharing!
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    QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited August 18, 2010
    they are not bad for your 1st. clap.gifThey do lack a bit of variety when it comes to their facial expressions. Also every one them could have benefited from some fill flash. Lastly besides the last one they are a 1/2 body lenght shots..maybe the rest of the set has more closeups and/or wider angles.
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    tward88tward88 Registered Users Posts: 18 Big grins
    edited August 19, 2010
    Thanks for the feedback it is very helpful.
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    Tom Ward
    http://www.twardphoto.com/
    Nikon D80 & D700; Alien Bees 800's; SB600's; Nikon 50mm 1.4; Tamron 28-75mm f/2.8; Tamron 70-200mm f/2.8; Tamron 90mm f/2.8 Macro
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    SurfdogSurfdog Registered Users Posts: 297 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2010
    I'm with Daniel on this one. Nice shots, but some fill flash would have certainly brightened the faces and lessened the "racoon eye" shadows. Some changes in facial angles and expressions would help. Have them look at each other, look away, look down, softly smile, thoughtful looks, etc.

    I will be anxious to see your 2nd engagement shoot.
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    Don't worry. I can fix you in photoshop.
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