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Wedding #2 as 2nd shooter - C&C appreciated

mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
edited October 3, 2010 in Weddings
Well, it's more of portraits and a reception. They were actually married a month ago because they wanted to be married on a cultural "lucky" day. They couldn't get a reception location booked on the same day so they split it up.

All of the outside shots I am using the 70-200 vr I that I rented for the first time. It's a nice piece of glass, but I was not used to composing with such a long lens. The bulkiness of it made it a little difficult as well.

I feel I learned a lot during this reception because the rooms(one for dining and one for dancing) were small and fairly dark. I was having inconsistent exposures bouncing flash and trying to quickly compensate. I think because of the small rooms, being closer or further away from a wall changed the flash strength a lot.

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    BlurmoreBlurmore Registered Users Posts: 992 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    wow nice light. looks like you were there at the right time of day. love the first one.
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    Moogle PepperMoogle Pepper Registered Users Posts: 2,950 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    <33 Princeton U! And the locations where you shot... I shot there too! <img src="https://us.v-cdn.net/6029383/emoji/rolleyes1.gif" border="0" alt="" >

    #1,9, and 14 ftw!
    Food & Culture.
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    QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    you did very welll. the inside bounced light is very nice. I am NOT digging #4 though.
    D700, D600
    14-24 24-70 70-200mm (vr2)
    85 and 50 1.4
    45 PC and sb910 x2
    http://www.danielkimphotography.com
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    BsimonBsimon Registered Users Posts: 252 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    Mpaulie, these are fantastic. Love all but 4 - but im sure that is the general consensus. Fabulous set!
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    mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    Blurmore wrote: »
    wow nice light. looks like you were there at the right time of day. love the first one.

    Thanks! I think it was a little after 5pm when we started, good thing the sun is setting sooner now.
    <33 Princeton U! And the locations where you shot... I shot there too! <img src="https://us.v-cdn.net/6029383/emoji/rolleyes1.gif&quot; border="0" alt="" >

    #1,9, and 14 ftw!

    Yup, it's your Princeton Ted! :D Thanks!
    Qarik wrote: »
    you did very welll. the inside bounced light is very nice. I am NOT digging #4 though.

    Thanks Qarik, I appreciate it! Anything in particular you don't like about #4? Pose, background, light, etc...
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    mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    Bsimon wrote: »
    Mpaulie, these are fantastic. Love all but 4 - but im sure that is the general consensus. Fabulous set!

    ok, whats wrong with #4 so I can not do that in the future? I may be blind from looking at these too long.
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    BsimonBsimon Registered Users Posts: 252 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    When compared to your other shots it is not as interesting and looks almost like a studio shot.

    If it wasnt in line with all of your other fabulous shots I think I could give it a bit more credit but judging from every other shot you took, it is out of place.
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    Moogle PepperMoogle Pepper Registered Users Posts: 2,950 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    Well 4, from my perspective she looks lifeless and worn out. There isn't much to work with the background either, so it is pretty blank.

    btw, you are blind cause you are hogging all the pumpkin beer.
    Food & Culture.
    www.tednghiem.com
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    QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    the pose, the expression, the color balance wrt to the rest of the shots, the crop, the light..nothing about it works for me. Finally as mentioned..it is the weakest shot of the bunch by far so it sticks out.
    D700, D600
    14-24 24-70 70-200mm (vr2)
    85 and 50 1.4
    45 PC and sb910 x2
    http://www.danielkimphotography.com
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    mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    Gotchya, very good input. Thanks Bsimon, Ted and Qarik.
    btw, you are blind cause you are hogging all the pumpkin beer.

    And Ted, I have no idea what you're talking aboutne_nau.gif

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    Moogle PepperMoogle Pepper Registered Users Posts: 2,950 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    mpaulie wrote: »
    Gotchya, very good input. Thanks Bsimon, Ted and Qarik.



    And Ted, I have no idea what you're talking aboutne_nau.gif

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    ......:patch

    One of these days...
    Food & Culture.
    www.tednghiem.com
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    Mark1616Mark1616 Registered Users Posts: 319 Major grins
    edited September 29, 2010
    Very very nice, clean photos. 4 has been discussed and I agree. I don't claim to be the best photographer (I know I'm not), but I know what I like and I like these. Good shooting and seems the 70-200 was a good choice to rent.

    I'm here to learn so please feel free to give me constructive criticism to help me become the photographer I desire to be.

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    mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited October 1, 2010
    Mark1616 wrote: »
    Very very nice, clean photos. 4 has been discussed and I agree. I don't claim to be the best photographer (I know I'm not), but I know what I like and I like these. Good shooting and seems the 70-200 was a good choice to rent.


    The 70-200 was a good choice, I would do it again but I'd also like to try Matt Saville's advice and check out the Sigma 50-150 on dx. Thanks for C&C!
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    AgnieszkaAgnieszka Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,263 Major grins
    edited October 1, 2010
    Very, very cool set ... and then the fact that you were "only" ("!") the second. YOu should be proud of yourself, looks like you got quite some awesome photos for you portfolio!
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    Ed911Ed911 Registered Users Posts: 1,306 Major grins
    edited October 2, 2010
    Nice work. Four is interesting...I can't say if it's a keeper...only the client can do that...it's a nice capture. She has such a pretty smile in her other pictures. Let us know if the client likes it.
    Remember, no one may want you to take pictures, but they all want to see them.
    Educate yourself like you'll live forever and live like you'll die tomorrow.

    Ed
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    GlortGlort Registered Users Posts: 1,015 Major grins
    edited October 3, 2010
    I think these are a nice set of pics that represent the standard fare a shooter should be able to produce.

    Of course they are not technically perfect, some appear a little soft, but who cares? They will think that's a special romantic effect anyway.
    The couple, the people that are hiring/ paying for the shooter, will love them and that's what counts.
    The technicals are not distracting or patently wrong like cut off heads ( and geez, with wedding work you could crop them tighter still, call it art, and they'd think you were a genius!) and that's what you get with real world wedding work.

    What I like about them and what I think is really important is that you have captured emotions. I smiled when I was looking through the pics and if everyone else does that when they look, then then the photos are big winners.
    If you went out tomorrow and delivered a whole album of pics of this standard, you would have happy clients that were referring their friends to you. That's as good as it gets.

    You don't need to be super creative with off the wall wacky ideas or flash album covers made of Mongolian Snow leopard and Dodo hide, you just need to produce a set of competent pics that capture the emotion of the day and your there.

    And, you ARE there.

    Well done.
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