last nights wedding

nicoleshilliday · October 22, 2010

just a quick edit on a few from last night.

C&C welcome

Qarik · October 22, 2010

nicole,

I would crop a bit of the foreground int he 1st shot and add a vignette

I would straighten the 2nd shot and brush in some exposure on the couple

I could crop more off the bottom in the ring shot and add a vignette

The last shot needs some stronger processing.

Moogle Pepper · October 22, 2010

Wedding on a Thursday? I might swing those. I like free weekends!

1. Trying the voyeur sneak shot?
2. Needs a little straightening and the two look like they need some light.
3. Serious bling!

nicoleshilliday · October 22, 2010

Moogle Pepper wrote: »

Wedding on a Thursday? I might swing those. I like free weekends!

1. Trying the voyeur sneak shot?
2. Needs a little straightening and the two look like they need some light.
3. Serious bling!

...me..5 months preggers...laying on the ground...on my stomach to get the first shot. HA!

i think the wrong version was exported on the second shoot. i THOUGHT the ground line was straight...will try again.

Moogle Pepper · October 22, 2010

Danger's your middle name? I hate when I click the wrong image to export. haha! Happens all the time!

WillCAD · October 22, 2010

Nice series. Wedding in a vinyard, huh? Pretty cool.

#1 - I like the effect you used, but I think it might look better if you cropped it to vertical and tightened up on the couple. You should still be able to get plenty of green at the bottom.

#2 - I'd try cropping this one horizontal, which would cut out a bit of the unneeded sky and ground while still keeping the couple and the silo in the shot.

#3 - I agree with Quarik, crop it tighter on the rings and add a vignette.

#4 - Try cropping this one tightly around the couple, cutting off their legs and making it an Elvis shot (waist up). Then clone out some of the utility lines in the sky. For the right edge of frame, go just a hair beyond his shoulder. FOr the left edge of frame, stop just before the utility pole.

nicoleshilliday · October 22, 2010

WillCAD wrote: »

Nice series. Wedding in a vinyard, huh? Pretty cool.

#1 - I like the effect you used, but I think it might look better if you cropped it to vertical and tightened up on the couple. You should still be able to get plenty of green at the bottom.

#2 - I'd try cropping this one horizontal, which would cut out a bit of the unneeded sky and ground while still keeping the couple and the silo in the shot.

#3 - I agree with Quarik, crop it tighter on the rings and add a vignette.

#4 - Try cropping this one tightly around the couple, cutting off their legs and making it an Elvis shot (waist up). Then clone out some of the utility lines in the sky. For the right edge of frame, go just a hair beyond his shoulder. FOr the left edge of frame, stop just before the utility pole.

thanks for your thoughts.

honestly with number one i really like the way it is. i like how they are within the vines of the vineyard. I will defiantly crop another shot the way you said and try out your other advice.

nicoleshilliday · October 22, 2010

Qarik wrote: »

nicole,

I would crop a bit of the foreground int he 1st shot and add a vignette

I would straighten the 2nd shot and brush in some exposure on the couple

I could crop more off the bottom in the ring shot and add a vignette

The last shot needs some stronger processing.

I am not to big on dark vignettes...actually, there is a slight one one on the first photo already

and i understand your thoughts on the last photo. Most of my work is true color, and sharp...this one is a little less me, and has a more sunset look.

Thanks.

nicoleshilliday · October 22, 2010

WillCAD wrote: »

Nice series. Wedding in a vinyard, huh? Pretty cool.

#1 - I like the effect you used, but I think it might look better if you cropped it to vertical and tightened up on the couple. You should still be able to get plenty of green at the bottom.

#2 - I'd try cropping this one horizontal, which would cut out a bit of the unneeded sky and ground while still keeping the couple and the silo in the shot.

#3 - I agree with Quarik, crop it tighter on the rings and add a vignette.

#4 - Try cropping this one tightly around the couple, cutting off their legs and making it an Elvis shot (waist up). Then clone out some of the utility lines in the sky. For the right edge of frame, go just a hair beyond his shoulder. FOr the left edge of frame, stop just before the utility pole.

ohhh and those are not power lines they are all part of the vineyard. but the light ones going through their heads i will clean up.

Darren Troy C · October 22, 2010

Really like that 1st one.

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