DSS75 - Which Came First?

WhatSheSaw · April 25, 2011

We had some nice weather this weekend, so I had to get out and about.

#1 Sunrise or Sunset

#2 Ebb or Flow (or Crest or Trough)

#2 Coming or Going

#3 Smoke or Fire

All suggestions and comments are much appreciated. :lust

lkbart · April 26, 2011

I really like #2 - Ebb & Flow - both the photo & the title are great! Love the way you caught the big swell & the rays; & the color of the seaweed really coordinates &/or accents the color from the horizon. The bubbles are really sweet too - hidden treasures!

#1 is nice but not striking; #3 - the tail lights make me think going & not coming; & #4 - like the silhouettes & the boy covering his face, but think the photo is a little too dark & the focus looks a little soft on the two around the fire. Hope this helps!

travelways · April 26, 2011

lkbart wrote: »

I really like #2 - Ebb & Flow - both the photo & the title are great! Love the way you caught the big swell & the rays; & the color of the seaweed really coordinates &/or accents the color from the horizon. The bubbles are really sweet too - hidden treasures!

#1 is nice but not striking; #3 - the tail lights make me think going & not coming; & #4 - like the silhouettes & the boy covering his face, but think the photo is a little too dark & the focus looks a little soft on the two around the fire. Hope this helps!

I agree with Lilian's comments and I like #2 too - very nice

konomaniac · April 26, 2011

lkbart wrote: »

I really like #2 - Ebb & Flow - both the photo & the title are great! Love the way you caught the big swell & the rays; & the color of the seaweed really coordinates &/or accents the color from the horizon. The bubbles are really sweet too - hidden treasures!

#1 is nice but not striking; #3 - the tail lights make me think going & not coming; & #4 - like the silhouettes & the boy covering his face, but think the photo is a little too dark & the focus looks a little soft on the two around the fire. Hope this helps!

Great ideas!!

I agree with Lillian's comments.

I really love the idea of sunrise or sunset, but the problem with entering sunsets in a contest is that we've all seen thousands of them, and unless it takes your breath away - it's just another good sunset (I've taken hundreds of good sunsets, I have yet to take a spectacular one

).

SeascapeS · April 26, 2011

Different again...I prefer #1 with the title of #2. I like the lighting better in #2, but not sure about the leaves in the foreground.

JAG · April 26, 2011

slpollett · April 26, 2011

I also like #2. Great title, too. I'm with Seascapes that I'm not sure I like the leaves in the foreground, but I love your composition in this one.

Sherry

sapphire73 · April 30, 2011

Lots of great ideas here! I like #2 best, I think. Sun up or sun down, sunrise or sunset, ebb or flow - they all work for me.

WhatSheSaw · April 30, 2011

Thanks for all of your comments!

I like #4, but my camera really does not do well in low light. The softness that you are seeing is probably motion blur. At least on the boy.

I tried a few crops of #2. Do any of them work better?

#5 Pano

#6 Square

#7 Left a bit of seaweed

#8 No Seaweed

sapphire73 · April 30, 2011

I think I prefer #8 with no seaweed, making even cropping just a smidgin more off the bottom. Lovely image and great idea!

travelways · April 30, 2011

sapphire73 wrote: »

I think I prefer #8 with no seaweed, making even cropping just a smidgin more off the bottom. Lovely image and great idea!

I didn't mind the seaweed in the beginning because it added some color, but I agree that without it's
better in this context. I think #8 is the best.

PS: maybe you can add a little more light (reduce the black) on the rocks in the foreground to show more texture...

DSS75 - Which Came First?

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