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7 Sins- Pride

JusticeiroJusticeiro Registered Users Posts: 1,177 Major grins
edited July 1, 2011 in Go Figure
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Too obscure? Too obvious? Too centered? What are your thoughts?
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    ScootersbabygirlScootersbabygirl Registered Users Posts: 224 Major grins
    edited June 9, 2011
    I like the pose, but I don't see pride here? How is this pride? To me it seems more like a native looking around warily for the predator to get her.
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    JusticeiroJusticeiro Registered Users Posts: 1,177 Major grins
    edited June 9, 2011
    peacock thing combined with ballet diva (the model is a dancer). Too much of a stretch I guess.
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    NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
    edited June 11, 2011
    I like it. Would setting a white point improve it? I imagine the histogram has nothing above mid tones?

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    briandelionbriandelion Registered Users Posts: 512 Major grins
    edited June 14, 2011
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    Hope you don't mind. Does this work better? I set the white point with room to spare. Reason behind the crop: thought it helped the gesture imply she was reaching for something out of frame. As it was it seemed to to me there was too much negative space surrounding her.
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    NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
    edited June 14, 2011
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    JusticeiroJusticeiro Registered Users Posts: 1,177 Major grins
    edited July 1, 2011
    briandelion wrote: »
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    Hope you don't mind. Does this work better? I set the white point with room to spare. Reason behind the crop: thought it helped the gesture imply she was reaching for something out of frame. As it was it seemed to to me there was too much negative space surrounding her.

    I like the crop a lot better. Looking at the original now, I think you are correct, it is far too centered. I prefer the darker look of the OG, though. Thanks for the work!
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