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orton two ways... first experiments

red_zonered_zone Registered Users Posts: 533 Major grins
edited September 10, 2011 in The Dgrin Challenges
I'd never heard of Orton or tried this before, but there seem to be two approaches - blurred motion of recognizable objects, and pure abstract...

It's been pouring here, so I've got some rainy, gloomy shots.
Set A:
A-1 Under the Bridge
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A-2 The Wheels on the Bus
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A-3 Passing Lane
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I have a re-usable bag with a bunch of brightly colored squares, indoors, in good light.
Set B:
B-1 Color Wheel
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B-2
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B-3
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What do you think? Am I doing it right?
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Jake

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    SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited September 9, 2011
    I like the last 3, but they need something. Maybe a little definition?
    SandiZ
    If I could tell the story in words, I wouldn't need to lug around a camera. ~Lewis Hine
    http://sandizphotos-seascapes.smugmug.com/
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    sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,948 moderator
    edited September 10, 2011
    Fun to see these two very different sets of images! I like the soft colors of the last three images and the "painterly" feel to these images, to use a word found on Orton's website. I like B-1 and B-3 best of the ones you've posted here, but wonder whether they would be stronger if a bit was cropped from one side (right side on B-1 and left on B-3) to move the focal point a bit more off center. Just a thought.

    Gretchen
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