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Jasper - critique please

PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
edited January 14, 2012 in People
My attempt to photograph a friend's infant son. Critique most welcome.

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The use of a camera is similar to that of a knife. You can use it to peel potatoes, or carve a flute. ~ E. Kahlmeyer
... I'm still peeling potatoes.

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    Bryce WilsonBryce Wilson Registered Users Posts: 1,586 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2012
    I like the pose a lot and it is a very cute baby. I also like the pinkness of the baby's skin tones.

    Here are a couple of things that could be improved upon, at least in my opinion.

    In this photograph the point where the hand is holding the foot is very sharp. The foot in the foreground is very soft. Not sure if that is a DOF issue or a SS issue, but for me and this pose, the entire baby should be sharp.

    Part of the baby is being hidden because of the softness of the item the baby is laying on. I would like to see the entire baby. Maybe use something a bit more firm the next time.

    Would also be nice to have the background be a bit more pure white.
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    PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2012
    Thanks Bryce. It was a DOF issue. I shot it on the spur of the moment while he was lying on the changing table. I will keep your suggestions in mind when next I have the opportunity to shoot him again. Thanks so much for the pointers.
    The use of a camera is similar to that of a knife. You can use it to peel potatoes, or carve a flute. ~ E. Kahlmeyer
    ... I'm still peeling potatoes.

    patti hinton photography
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    BrettDeutschBrettDeutsch Registered Users Posts: 365 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2012
    It's a cute shot, no doubt. But it doesn't quite pop. If you have any off-camera lights (flash, strobe, etc.), you could add some shadowing and depth to the shot.
    Deutsch Photography: Actor & Executive Headshot Photographer | NY Wedding, Mitzvah and Corporate Event Photographer | Family & Child Portrait Studio
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    HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2012
    Also you need to have the infant further from the background. You can see discoloration between the hand and foot. Agree on the depth of field issue. All in all it is a nice shot but a professional would watch out for these issues. Keep posting and educating yourself in photography and business.
    Charles
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    VitaminVVitaminV Registered Users Posts: 58 Big grins
    edited January 13, 2012
    I think this is REAL close to being a very nice capture. I also like the pose and the shooting angle. I think the DOF would be fine, if the focal point was the eyes/face and not the back foot. I'm guessing the camera picked it?

    And then as Bryce pointed out, the edge of the changing table (?) both in the front and behind the baby's head is distracting in both how it hides part of the baby and in the reflective property of the plastic. I'd probably grab a soft fuzzy blanket, either white or some other pale soft color.

    If no one else will say it, I will. At this angle, you can lose the diaper, especially with the white background. With it, a good percentage of area is washed out. Plus I think it would add to the cute factor, unless of course the parent is against it.
    -MikeV-

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    IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited January 13, 2012
    As close as you were, if you shoot it again, I'd crank that lens down to f/11. Your flash should be able to handle that.
    John :
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    PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
    edited January 14, 2012
    Thanks so much for all the tips you've provided. It was a spur of the moment thing - no off camera lights etc, just my SB800. Totally agree about the diaper as well. Next time.
    The use of a camera is similar to that of a knife. You can use it to peel potatoes, or carve a flute. ~ E. Kahlmeyer
    ... I'm still peeling potatoes.

    patti hinton photography
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