First image: diggin the composition, and nice use of natural light.
Second image: Use off camera flash. The flash is too straight on here, causing the image to look flat. Her pose is a bit awkward, looks very forced. Not really digging the composition either. I'd like to see more of the background and have her a bit off centered.
And another thing, you need to stop getting frustrated. I went through some of your post history, and you've thrown multiple rants about people not commenting on your work. Listen to critiques you agree with, make changes, and post new stuff. The more you improve, the better the imagery, the more feedback you will get.
And another thing, you need to stop getting frustrated. I went through some of your post history, and you've thrown multiple rants about people not commenting on your work. Listen to critiques you agree with, make changes, and post new stuff. The more you improve, the better the imagery, the more feedback you will get.
I would add: this site has been slower of late; it does take a while to get responses, but if you wait patiently, they will come and experienced dgrinners are excellent and constructive teachers. A lot of people (myself included) have been crazy busy of late and even though we may read a thread, don't have time to reply in depth.
PS I like the light/processing in the first one, but the tilt is odd. That said, the ground behind her looks level, so can't tell whether it's just a dune or you did it in Post.
I like the overal feel to the set. As pointed out off camera flash in 2 or no flash may have been better. You may want to lighten up the water spots on her cover in 2.
thanks for the replies and feed back guys i dont rant that much but when your post disapears of the page u get frustrated so i do apologise for that yes she was lying on the side of a sand dune will have another practice shoot soon with her or another model look forward to your responses then again sorry for the frustration
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Second image: Use off camera flash. The flash is too straight on here, causing the image to look flat. Her pose is a bit awkward, looks very forced. Not really digging the composition either. I'd like to see more of the background and have her a bit off centered.
And another thing, you need to stop getting frustrated. I went through some of your post history, and you've thrown multiple rants about people not commenting on your work. Listen to critiques you agree with, make changes, and post new stuff. The more you improve, the better the imagery, the more feedback you will get.
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I would add: this site has been slower of late; it does take a while to get responses, but if you wait patiently, they will come and experienced dgrinners are excellent and constructive teachers. A lot of people (myself included) have been crazy busy of late and even though we may read a thread, don't have time to reply in depth.