Edited: A few from tonight. Lol

anonymouscuban · May 31, 2013

I used to work with this guy a few years ago. He is currently in between jobs and hired me to shoot a couple corporate headshot for his LinkedIn profile and to send along with his resume. We were chatting during the session and he mentioned he works as a bouncer when he needs extra money. He changed after the session so I decided to take a couple casual shots of him. Something a little edgy for his darker, bouncer side.

David_S85 · May 31, 2013

I like the controlled lighting work at top and with the highlight following along the edges. That works! However, he looks more depressed than edgy with his head tipped down like that. So as a bouncer shot, it doesn't work for me. Maybe open up the darkness on the top of his arms more to make him appear more powerful? Crop less on the right? (same reason)

michaelglenn · May 31, 2013

I agree with Dave. The lighting is wonderful, but having is head leaning downward makes the shot a bit depressing. Keeping his head up should do the trick. Also if you look at his eyes, they are looking slightly away from the camera. Make sure to tell him to look into the lens. It will leave a more compelling shot. I really do enjoy the lighting though.

anonymouscuban · May 31, 2013

Thanks guys. I don't disagree about the pose. I kept directing him to straighten his head but he'd tilt it again. I looked at his FB page and most of his photos have the same tilt. I do have a two more shots like this one, need to see if the one with the straight head is OK. He was also pursing his lips a lot, which I kept telling him not to do so I'm hoping the other shots don't have that issue.

In contrast to this shot, here are two of the 3 shots I took for his professional headshots. Love to hear what you think, especially on the skin. He has some very tiny acne bumps that I healed out but want to make sure it's not overdone. Doesn't look like it to me but I'd like other opinions. Any other comments are welcome too.

Oh.. and I don't necessarily like the watch in the 2nd shot. It seems a little casual to me but he insisted on wearing it.

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Foques · May 31, 2013

holy crap, what a difference!

anonymouscuban · May 31, 2013

HAHA... big difference indeed.

Hackbone · May 31, 2013

Your lighting is absolutely fantastic, YOU need to teach what to do.

Watch out for jacket creep. Leaning over, folding arms it will bunch in front and rise in the back. If your called on to do some clothing work got to watch out for that.

anonymouscuban · May 31, 2013

Hackbone wrote: »

Your lighting is absolutely fantastic, YOU need to teach what to do.

Watch out for jacket creep. Leaning over, folding arms it will bunch in front and rise in the back. If your called on to do some clothing work got to watch out for that.

Thanks Hack. I've come a long way, that's for sure. UGH... the jacket. I tried pulling and tucking that thing so much but I just couldn't get rid of the rolls and stuff.

Edited: A few from tonight. Lol

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