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Senior photos C & C please

rogerchesterrogerchester Registered Users Posts: 90 Big grins
edited June 3, 2013 in People
A few shots from last weekend

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canon 40D EF70- 200mm 1:2.8 l is usm EF28-135mm F3.5-5.6 IS USM

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    MitchellMitchell Registered Users Posts: 3,503 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2013
    These are pretty good.

    #1 needs to be cropped much tighter for me. The shadow really bugs me on this one. She's just too close to that wall and the sharp shadow is distracting. I might have tried that one with just a reflector and no flash. Looks like you probably had enough natural light.

    #2 could be cropped tighter and less centered. I don't really like her expression. I realize they don't need a cheesy smile, but her face here just looks like a frown. It's also tough to light the face with this type of pose. Just not enough light on her face up against that wall despite there being some good light on the back of her neck. I might have tried having her back to the wall facing the other direction. A few steps then to your right would have given us a better view of that interesting wall.
    Mitch
    http://clearwaterphotography.smugmug.com/
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    rogerchesterrogerchester Registered Users Posts: 90 Big grins
    edited June 3, 2013
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    canon 40D EF70- 200mm 1:2.8 l is usm EF28-135mm F3.5-5.6 IS USM
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