Goinf way different

BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
edited September 15, 2013 in Go Figure
For those who have been hitting me for doing all commercial work, here we go:

1. Keep an eye on that parking lot outside.
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2.
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3.
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4. Took me a good 20 min to get this lined up and lit
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Like them or not, you gotta give me they're different from me
Bilsen (the artist formerly known as John Galt NY)
Canon 600D; Canon 1D Mk2;
24-105 f4L IS; 70-200 f4L IS; 50mm 1.4; 28-75 f2.8; 55-250 IS; 580EX & (2) 430EX Flash,
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Comments

  • M38A1M38A1 Registered Users Posts: 1,317 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2013
    Yep, a departure from your normal work....

    I think #1 is the strongest for a variety of reasons. More specifically it's sharp focus.

    I also like what you were trying to do in #4. Maybe focus more on the glass and it's image as a very close shot?
  • jonh68jonh68 Registered Users Posts: 2,711 Major grins
    edited August 18, 2013
    One is best, but it kind of looks like she is about to, well take care of a nature call.

    4 is the best concept but the lighting is off. You need dramatic lighting for this type of shot and the color doesn't add anything. I think maybe one light directly to the side of the model and an another also directly to the side of the glass would be better.
  • BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2013
    Thanks guys. I can do #2 & 3 sharper. I actually blurred them a bit but that's a personal choice.
    Bilsen (the artist formerly known as John Galt NY)
    Canon 600D; Canon 1D Mk2;
    24-105 f4L IS; 70-200 f4L IS; 50mm 1.4; 28-75 f2.8; 55-250 IS; 580EX & (2) 430EX Flash,
    Model Galleries: http://bilsen.zenfolio.com/
    Everything Else: www.pbase.com/bilsen
  • TinstaflTinstafl Registered Users Posts: 355 Major grins
    edited September 14, 2013
    YEs they are different. I like 1,3 and 4.
  • BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited September 15, 2013
    Thanks Tin. Will be shooting w Amanda in October.
    Bilsen (the artist formerly known as John Galt NY)
    Canon 600D; Canon 1D Mk2;
    24-105 f4L IS; 70-200 f4L IS; 50mm 1.4; 28-75 f2.8; 55-250 IS; 580EX & (2) 430EX Flash,
    Model Galleries: http://bilsen.zenfolio.com/
    Everything Else: www.pbase.com/bilsen
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