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The white lights of transport
Michiel de Brieder
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Hi all!
Been a while since I visited dgrin but I'm really looking forward to picking up photography again! So today I wanted to share an image with you and I would like to know your thoughts:
You're looking at the overhead lights of a train compartment, I personally liked the lines of this composition very much but I'm wondering whether it appeals to others 
any C&C?
Cheers,
Michiel
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I can see what appealed to you. I think it would be stronger if you cropped a bit off the bottom--there's a lot going on there that has little to do with the flowing lines in the rest. A good case of less is more.
Thanks @Richard!
Got myself a re-edit here with a crop and a slightly different coloring:
Better? Also: this edit was made on a computer instead of a phone, the quality difference of course being astonishing
Thanks!
Michiel
Michiel de Brieder
http://www.digital-eye.nl
I like the shot. I prefer the crop, but like the original processing better.
www.mind-driftphoto.com
Thanks Juano!
So, like this?
Cheers,
Michiel
Michiel de Brieder
http://www.digital-eye.nl
This one works nicely - I like it.
Musings & ramblings at https://denisegoldberg.blogspot.com
Oooh! very nice indeed!
www.mind-driftphoto.com
Yes, I like the crop. I don't have any preference for the toning--they both look good.
Thanks for the comments! I like the crop better as well!
Michiel de Brieder
http://www.digital-eye.nl