Architectural shot

JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,878 Major grins

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,893 moderator

    Love it. Good comp, textures and conversion. Well done.

  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,878 Major grins

    @Richard said:
    Love it. Good comp, textures and conversion. Well done.

    Many thanks!

  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins

    Great Cristobal!

    I would explore if dimming down the right bright edge helps....its competing hard with the leading line inside.....

  • toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins

    Nice.. I like the high contrast

    Rags
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,878 Major grins

    Thanks guys.

  • kurzvorzwoelfkurzvorzwoelf Registered Users Posts: 339 Major grins

    Awesome picture Cristobal. I like the point of view and the patterns and lines it generates, and in combination with the textures on the walls and on the bottom it gets really interesting. Conversion is top notch, as we're used from your works.

    I do agree with Taz tho, that the foreground right part of the picture is too heavily lit - my eyes want to naturally follow from the left foreground to the right background, but get distracted by the highlights in the right sided foreground pillar. Other than that, truly great piece of work!

    Where did you take it?

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  • black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,319 Major grins

    Very nice, Cristóbal. I like the shot just as it is. Good conversion work.

    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,878 Major grins

    Thanks for the comments, here is a reworked version.

  • kurzvorzwoelfkurzvorzwoelf Registered Users Posts: 339 Major grins

    Perfect!

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  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,878 Major grins

    Thanks!

  • willard3willard3 Registered Users Posts: 2,580 Major grins
    edited April 13, 2018

    Odd man out, I like the original better. The bright vertical is balanced nicely by the bright floor on the left.

    Good conversion

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  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins

    Re-work is primo!

  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,878 Major grins

    Thanks for the input! Always interesting to hear different perspectives.

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