Elephants on the Playa

pathfinderpathfinder Drive By Digital Shooterwestern IndianaPosts: 14,281Super Moderators moderator

Several years ago I was on safari in Kenya near Amboseli photographing elephants as they walk across the dry lake bed towards a water hole - laying on the ground I found this frame which I finally think I have rendered the way I want it. Comments are heartily encouraged - I try to learn something from every one!

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Comments

  • denisegoldbergdenisegoldberg Major grins North Andover, MAPosts: 11,918Super Moderators moderator

    I like it. You've captured what looks like slow, deliberate movement, and the sky behind them is wonderful.

    In a perfect world I would have preferred more space in front of the elephant on the right, but the capture of two of these beasts is wonderful.

  • pathfinderpathfinder Drive By Digital Shooter western IndianaPosts: 14,281Super Moderators moderator

    "Slow deliberate movement"

    I think that is exactly what they were doing - no real hurry, but no detours or deviations - just a straight line to the water hole. Thank you , Denise!

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  • kurzvorzwoelfkurzvorzwoelf Stuttgart, GermanyPosts: 130Registered Users Major grins

    An awesome perspective and some very dramatic sky here. I wish the elephants had a little more exposure (although I don't know about the lighting conditions on that shot), because it's somehow the sky that is drawing my attention more than those beautiful animals. Maybe raise up some of the shadows in the elephants using some kind of advanced masking or darken the top of the sky a little?

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  • pathfinderpathfinder Drive By Digital Shooter western IndianaPosts: 14,281Super Moderators moderator

    Thank you for your suggestion, I have thought at some length whether the ellies were just a smidge too dark against that dramatic sky and thought I’d post it as it is and see if anyone called me out on their tonality. I do have a mask for them and I can lighten them just a touch, and then I might just ever so lightly darken the foreground grass as well. It will take me a few days as I am currently travelling, but sometime this weekend I will post a revised edition and we can see which the readers here prefer. Again, thank you for your comment.

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  • StumblebumStumblebum I shoot, therefore I am Posts: 7,265Registered Users Major grins

    I can't help but feel bit of envy.....oh I wish I can see something like this one day.....

    Very interesting light.....

    The highlights are all literally on the ground.....all their toes are lit up and somehow the area under the paws is lit up......sun was low?

    I agree on the tonality suggestion above....maybe just a tad brighter.....if they have highlights on them I would bring it out more....

    The out of focus foreground especially the stuff to bottom right.....big attention getter.....I know we shoot wildlife with wide apertures.....as it should be.....99% of the time that makes it great.....but if you have have more of that ground in focus I would try to replace it or do what is necessary to take eye away from it somehow....

    Having said all that.....these are the kind of images I dream of creating!

    Cheers Jim!

  • Tony BrittonTony Britton Major grins Central Coast of CaliforniaPosts: 334Registered Users Major grins

    The more time I spend with this wonderful image the more I appreciate your choice of rendering and posting it as is. I find that there is more than enough light on the elephants to compliment the lighting and emotional impact the incredibly dramatic sky provides. I appreciate the subtle slivers of sunlight on the forehead, portions of the ears and around the feet of these magnificent elephants. Wonderful. This image might also serve as an excellent candidate for an additional black & white companion image. I always enjoy viewing your excellent and inspirational work!

    Best regards,

    Tony
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  • kdogkdog artistically challenged San Jose, CAPosts: 11,236Administrators moderator

    Lovely, Jim!!

    @Tony Britton said:
    I find that there is more than enough light on the elephants to compliment the lighting and emotional impact the incredibly dramatic sky provides.

    Nailed it. The contrast of the elephants against this killer sky makes the shot, and lightening the elephants would only diminish that. Another hour or two and this would be a silhouette and that would work too. We don't need to see all the details of the elephants, just observe them in this incredible space and doing what elephants do.

  • pathfinderpathfinder Drive By Digital Shooter western IndianaPosts: 14,281Super Moderators moderator
    edited August 13, 2018

    I finally am back home and went back to my files the elephants walking before the storm - and I have a newer version with ever so slightly brightened highlights on the elephants and a darkened foreground - not a big change, but slightly better without altering what was nice about the first image I believe. I think how well the first image is liked, depends to a certain degree on the brightness settings of the monitor it is viewed on - I like it on my LG HD monitor, but it does seem a touch dark on my Ipad but not on my HDR LG TV - so there's that to think about as well.

    Anyway, here is my slightly revised version which I think may be slightly more interesting than the first- mostly in the highlights on the tusks and ears.

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  • pathfinderpathfinder Drive By Digital Shooter western IndianaPosts: 14,281Super Moderators moderator

    Tony, I’ll try monochrome a bit later when I have more time.

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  • StumblebumStumblebum I shoot, therefore I am Posts: 7,265Registered Users Major grins

    Reworked to near perfection! Bravo Jim!

  • StumblebumStumblebum I shoot, therefore I am Posts: 7,265Registered Users Major grins

    Now attention is away from fg.....the light on Ellies drawing attention to them.....and then once one has enjoyed them a bit....then eye wanders elsewhere to soak it all in!

  • pathfinderpathfinder Drive By Digital Shooter western IndianaPosts: 14,281Super Moderators moderator
    edited August 13, 2018

    Here ya go, Tony, monochrome via Silver FX.

    Now which better?? - color or monochrome?? - I find it a very hard choice myself - both have things I like, but the monochrome works reasonably well I think.

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  • shniksshniks The Light Explorer Posts: 863Registered Users Major grins

    I really like this new version. Looks great.

  • Tony BrittonTony Britton Major grins Central Coast of CaliforniaPosts: 334Registered Users Major grins
    edited August 13, 2018

    Fortunately, both versions can coexist quite amicably! If I were a collector of fine art photography and were to see both versions available for purchase in a gallery, I'd immediately select the monochrome. With the monochrome version the glorious interplay between light & shadow is especially in full display. Particularly because of the stunning effect monochrome has on the clouds I see the elements within this excellent photo as an equal celebration of the magnificent elephants and the dynamic environment in which they live. Congratulations on capturing this stunning and memorable photograph!

    Best regards,

    Tony

  • StumblebumStumblebum I shoot, therefore I am Posts: 7,265Registered Users Major grins

    Both great! Can't lose any!

  • pathfinderpathfinder Drive By Digital Shooter western IndianaPosts: 14,281Super Moderators moderator

    I printed both files this evening, and on paper, I do prefer the monochrome image - the color just seems less interesting when printed.

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