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CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins
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Criticism is always welcome.

Don
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,908 moderator

    It's an odd composition but it makes me smile somehow. Love the light. There seems to be some banding or discoloration in the darkest areas--is this a reflection or shot through glass?

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  • CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins

    Thanks for commenting, Richard. I darkened the shadows some to eliminate some faint, distracting details. Apparently I did it unevenly and I'll check.

    Don
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  • kurzvorzwoelfkurzvorzwoelf Registered Users Posts: 339 Major grins

    Very nice & moody shot and a great idea for a photo, @Cornflake - I like it much!

    I can see some artefacts in the blacks too, if I look closely, although it doesn't distract my eyes. But there's some kind of halo around or next to the man's arm, which makes the frame feel a little "unreal" to me. Maybe it's worth brushing it off or it just might be that my display is too bright.

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  • CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins

    Thanks, kurzvorzwoelf. I have no doubt that you and Richard are correct. I've been traveling and haven't been able to check the photo but I will.

    Don
    Gallery: http://cornflakeaz.smugmug.com/
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,880 Major grins

    @Richard said:
    It's an odd composition but it makes me smile somehow. Love the light. There seems to be some banding or discoloration in the darkest areas--is this a reflection or shot through glass?

    I agree, it is an unusual composition, but it works. It makes me wonder if someone else should have been sitting there but has departed... Great light. I can't see the banding or artifacts on my screen.

    Cristóbal


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  • CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins

    Thanks, Cristobal.

    Don
    Gallery: http://cornflakeaz.smugmug.com/
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