I am not really sure what you the visual focus of these shots should be.
I find I get distracted in the 2nd shot away from her by the sheets.
Not sure how much control you have over your light source, but if you could somehow direct it a little more to just light the area you want focus on, or burn in other parts of the image, thereby keeping one focal point.
"A photo is like a hamburger. You can get one from McDonalds for $1, one from Chili's for $5, or one from Ruth's Chris for $15. You usually get what you pay for, but don't expect a Ruth's Chris burger at a McDonalds price, if you want that, go cook it yourself." - me
I am not really sure what you the visual focus of these shots should be.
I find I get distracted in the 2nd shot away from her by the sheets.
Not sure how much control you have over your light source, but if you could somehow direct it a little more to just light the area you want focus on, or burn in other parts of the image, thereby keeping one focal point.
thanks for the comments!
,much appreciated.
i was hoping that the pics would be more muted (maybe more desaturated) and that the red bow/tie thingy of the corset woudl stay really vibrant.
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I find I get distracted in the 2nd shot away from her by the sheets.
Not sure how much control you have over your light source, but if you could somehow direct it a little more to just light the area you want focus on, or burn in other parts of the image, thereby keeping one focal point.
thanks for the comments!
,much appreciated.
i was hoping that the pics would be more muted (maybe more desaturated) and that the red bow/tie thingy of the corset woudl stay really vibrant.
cool,
thanks again!
-Michale
canon rebel XTi
18-55mm lens
60mm macro lens
75-300mm telephoto lens
canon speelite 580 EXII