Both great, but I think #2 is really great! ...I'm not sure I agree with the "daddy" assumption; I don't see any obvious connection, although the wavy lines in the fence are pretty cool! - Wil
#1 has the bag as the subject, which is not a strong one. #2 is wonderful! Question is whether an intimate moment was interrupted by "a loose thread on his shirt" or if that is a prelude/excuse to an intimate moment... Either way, daddy is pretending to be focusing his attention elsewhere