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Re: Black (4 pics)
your shutter speed is too low on #1, and the shot's reason for being is unclear. avoid cutting limbs off. #2 is out of focus, otherwise the amusing ipod + anne rice combo would be more compelling/obvious. #3 is a pretty girl, that's about it. #4 is overexposed, but worth working on to see if you can save it. -
Re: Black (4 pics)
Richard, The guy in #2 looks straight out of central casting for the book he's reading--Anne Rice does the Vampire chronicles etc., actually they all look like they could play a role in one of her movies. #4, what a character! I like them all and while 3 leaves you wondering so what? I like the look of it. -
Re: Black (4 pics)
Thanks for all the feedback, everyone. It is always interesting to see other people's ideas of what works and what doesn't. A few comments to the comments. I don't really see a focus issue in #1, but #2 does have one. If you don't have cape envy (like I do) #1 may not mean much. Glad to see that Liz picked up on what… -
Re: Black (4 pics)
I don't see evidence of too low a shutter speed in #1. The caveat of not cutting limbs off is balanced by the school of including only what adds. The interest factor in this couple is all above the waist. The image gains nothing by being a full-body view. It seems his left knee (right as we view it) was the point of focus… -
Re: Black (4 pics)
Nice job! I like all of them (but I might have cropped different…) Wow, just look at the texture in the top right of #1 (keyhole/lock etc. - I'd have moved in for some close-ups…) #2 - I wish his face was in focus (w/o focus, looks like an accident… ooops!) #3 - what a gorgeous woman! Love the hoops (I'd have trimmed just…
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