I enjoy all your photos. #2 and #5 are so much more dynamic than #7 -- especially the model's feet in #7. I like the rest of the girl straight on, but could she turn her feet a little? I always love your lighting...
I would have loved to do your "legwork" for this girl D 2: cute! 3: good 4 & 5: toning too unsophisticated for me; too much of a good thing 6: would also pick portrait crop here 7: would crop 2:3 with girl to the right (nice pose and leg shapes)