#2 is a very nice exposure...the choice to expose for the couple and let the sky go was a good one.
#3 the lighting here is super nice. You retained some shadows but they are nice and soft with smooth transitions. THe vignetting works well.
#1 I am not crazy about...the other heads out of focus don't help, but probably wouldn't have killed it for me, but added to the flowers partially blocking her and the palish skin tones...well
hey everyone, thanks for the feedback. Jeff thanks for the detailed CC. I have to admit I was kind of fan of this shot(#1); "face lost in the crowd" kind of thing, but I guess it can be a bit distracting. I agree with the "pale" comment. I probably shoud have increased the brightness a bit and warmed it up in PS. Going through so many photos it's amazing how many times I look back and see something I wish I would of tweeked a little different. Thanks again everyone.
hey everyone, thanks for the feedback. Jeff thanks for the detailed CC. I have to admit I was kind of fan of this shot(#1); "face lost in the crowd" kind of thing, but I guess it can be a bit distracting. I agree with the "pale" comment. I probably shoud have increased the brightness a bit and warmed it up in PS. Going through so many photos it's amazing how many times I look back and see something I wish I would of tweeked a little different. Thanks again everyone.
If it were min....#1...I might give it a try in BW or better yet a nice warm toned monotone image.....the flowers will be less of a distraction.
I also like #1, i had to look twice to see the two different faces on each side. Could just be me, but it looks like it needs a little bit of straightening??
#3 would be a great end of the wedding album shot! She looks sleepy and just ready for everyone to go home! Ready to enjoy her wedding night!
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#3 the lighting here is super nice. You retained some shadows but they are nice and soft with smooth transitions. THe vignetting works well.
#1 I am not crazy about...the other heads out of focus don't help, but probably wouldn't have killed it for me, but added to the flowers partially blocking her and the palish skin tones...well
The skin tones in the other two are great!
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If it were min....#1...I might give it a try in BW or better yet a nice warm toned monotone image.....the flowers will be less of a distraction.
Jeff
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#3 would be a great end of the wedding album shot! She looks sleepy and just ready for everyone to go home! Ready to enjoy her wedding night!
thanks for posting! Enjoyed
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