Thirsty? - 2.4 Entry

Bendr

Here is my first attempt for challenge 2.4



Exif

Any thoughts?
C&C Welcome.

Thanks!

VisualXpressions

Very interesting... it almost looks abstract... I like the geometric balance of the 2 water fountains... you know what would be cool? if you could get one fountain to dispense water...

Winston

richtersl

Nice! I'd like to see some more of the wall's texture. Perhaps a little more contrast might do the trick.

Bendr

VisualXpressions wrote:

Very interesting... it almost looks abstract... I like the geometric balance of the 2 water fountains... you know what would be cool? if you could get one fountain to dispense water...

Winston

Thanks!

That would be kind of cool, if only I had a way...

Bendr

richtersl wrote:

Nice! I'd like to see some more of the wall's texture. Perhaps a little more contrast might do the trick.

Alrighty then!

Here is version two... with a lot more contrast, focused on the background.



Also while I was fiddling around with the photo, I came up with this version.



Same photo except for I turned off the black & white layer.

Again, Thanks for the advice,
And C&C welcome.

Ed911

I think this is your best...the background is much better...adds a bit more to the picture in my opinion. Interesting shot...and a point and shoot...just goes to show you that you don't have to have an expensive camera to make art.

richtersl

Ed911 wrote:

I think this is your best...the background is much better...adds a bit more to the picture in my opinion. Interesting shot...and a point and shoot...just goes to show you that you don't have to have an expensive camera to make art.

The background looks much better now.

Bendr

Ed911 wrote:

I think this is your best...the background is much better...adds a bit more to the picture in my opinion. Interesting shot...and a point and shoot...just goes to show you that you don't have to have an expensive camera to make art.

Thanks, Glad you like it!

And I do have an expensive camera(40D), I'm just trying to carry a camera with me everywhere, so I got a G9 Do I still qualify?

Bendr

richtersl wrote:

The background looks much better now.

Thanks!