Sawtooth Valley, Central Idaho

Albert Dickson

A few from last weekend. C&C is encouraged please.

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Thanks for your input.

Tango

great series,

im no pro but i can give you some c&c i think will help.

#2 nice!
im not sure what you have going on above the mtn, on both sides of the peak look to have a dark halo...? i think you can fix that with some finess.
also i think a grad mask from right to left would balence out your shot wonderfully.

#3 love love the composition.
suble curve adjustments will help the bg sky be more defined.

#4 those old cabins would make for some awesome hdr images...
if you go back bracket your expos and try it out.

if you dont know what some of this stuff is and wanna know id be glad to help later on.

if you are one that would rather not process further excuse the ring, i still think they are good as they are ..( though, i prefer a little more tweeking)

Albert Dickson

Thanks Aaron,
I don't know wha that "dark Halo" is either. I missed it until you mentioned it.

AaronNelson wrote:

great series,

im no pro but i can give you some c&c i think will help.

#2 nice!
im not sure what you have going on above the mtn, on both sides of the peak look to have a dark halo...? i think you can fix that with some finess.
also i think a grad mask from right to left would balence out your shot wonderfully.

#3 love love the composition.
suble curve adjustments will help the bg sky be more defined.

#4 those old cabins would make for some awesome hdr images...
if you go back bracket your expos and try it out.

if you dont know what some of this stuff is and wanna know id be glad to help later on.

if you are one that would rather not process further excuse the ring, i still think they are good as they are ..( though, i prefer a little more tweeking)

Albert Dickson

Ok only one taker for C&C . Lets try again. Here are two versions of PP for image #1. Please feel free to fire at will.

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1b


Thanks bunches.

Dogdots

I like the first one on your second posting, but I see a white circular spot in the shadows of the mountain.....about 1/4 ways in from the right. Other then that...I think is is just fine