Blanca

JDEORTA

These were taken in the harsh AZ sun. most of them are unedited, some I adjusted a little in Light Room. Critique away:D

#1


#2


#3


#4
My wife's fav


#5
My friend and the other girl that came along. :wow


#6


#7


Thanks for looking. I look forward to your comments suggestions and critiques:cool

urbanaries

Love the lighting and angle in #6 best, followed by #1.

She is just beautiful!

I like where you were going in #4, the light just isn't doing her face justice.

cmorganphotography

You're obviously taller than the girl. #2 and #6 you're taller angle made her look shorter and scrunched. Staying eye level with her eliminated this problem in the others. I like #4 as well. I think with a little work to bring her eyes back out of the shadows you're going to have a portfolio star for the both of you.
I like the pose in #1. The last one is all blown to heck but I like it, looks like a perfume ad. Ever notice how model shoots sometimes look like product ads? Mine turned in to a Mercedes and BMW product placement ad! I should post those....

Thanks for sharing these beachy goodies!

anwmn1

awe the fossil springs area... nice location

I like 6 and 7 of these. There was great potential in 1 and 4 but the you needed to use fill flash to make it work.

I am trying to remember your buddy's name.... :bash tell him to get on here and post too. I'll check his site when I get home.

Looks like a fun time-

Vysionous

Naiceee

Nikolai

I like the pose and the angle on #2 the best.
And I will keep the rest of my C&C until you post the edited versions...