Can someone?

KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
edited August 1, 2008 in Finishing School
Here is a picture of my daughter in her playroom. I wanted to know if everyone thought it looked sharp? (this is with my Canon) if anyone could please make her eyes a little better? I want to see what can be done to them.

IMG_1151.jpg

nothing has been done to this image
~Katie~
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2 Canon 14-55mm
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Canon 580EX
Canon 580EX II

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  • VanquizVanquiz Registered Users Posts: 199 Major grins
    edited July 31, 2008
    Here I tried to sharpened the eyes a bit
    Attempt #1.
    img1151aqc1.th.jpg

    Attempt #2.
    img1151bxf9.th.jpg

    She's so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute :)
  • pyrtekpyrtek Registered Users Posts: 539 Major grins
    edited July 31, 2008
  • KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited July 31, 2008
    Wow, thanks to both of you. that looks so much better! clap.gif
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
  • geospatial_junkiegeospatial_junkie Registered Users Posts: 707 Major grins
    edited July 31, 2008
    Before:
    342516364_FJ98h-X3.jpg

    After:
    342516278_gTu8w-X3.jpg

    Changed the luminosity in the eyes (to increase glint in eye) and enlarged the pupils by 120%. Also used color dodging with eyes so that they didn't get too light.

    A seperate layer of the background was greater using Fluid Mask (or you could use the pen tool). I found the background way to distracting so I used a Guassian Blur value of 4 (anymore and I found it to be to unnatural).

    Overlay masked diffusion was created on a seperate layer to smooth out the skin (very slighty) and great a bit more of a bleached look.

    Conversion was then made to LAB colormode were the A and B channel levels were compressed slightly to increase saturation a slight bit. They a value of 5 was added to unsharpen mask on the Lightness channel (still in LAB mode). This was more to add some grain rather than sharpen the image.

    Lastly, I cropped the output image so that the subject was not dead-center. There are various possibilities, however, this was the one that I chose.
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  • KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited August 1, 2008
    Here is what I came up with, is it ok?


    342821784_img_1151.jpg
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
  • geospatial_junkiegeospatial_junkie Registered Users Posts: 707 Major grins
    edited August 1, 2008
    Looks good. The only thing I would change is the white balance of the photo (if in raw). It seems a little cold. Or try to emulate a gold reflector in PS to warm up the photo. Other than that, it looks fine.
    "They've done studies you know. Sixty-percent of the time, it works every time."

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