various attempts at 37

AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
edited April 26, 2005 in The Dgrin Challenges
your opinions are appreciated as always.

#1: Pigeon Holes
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#2: Stand pipe
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#3: Apt. 109
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#4: Urban Rhythm
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#5: Hollywood Roll
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  • PrezwoodzPrezwoodz Registered Users Posts: 1,147 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    I think number 1 or #3 best fit the spirit of the competition

    good shots
  • FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    I agree that #1 and #3 probably fit this challenge the best and of the two I prefer #3. But, for grabbing my interest, I really like #5, I'd crop out the left side of it and a bit of the bottom to remove uninteresting distractions and maybe play with straightening it a bit. thumb.gif


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  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 22, 2005
    Flyinggina wrote:
    I agree that #1 and #3 probably fit this challenge the best and of the two I prefer #3. But, for grabbing my interest, I really like #5, I'd crop out the left side of it and a bit of the bottom to remove uninteresting distractions and maybe play with straightening it a bit. Virginia
    Virginia - thanks for the input. Interesting point on #5. I originally did exactly that however I was concerned that losing the elements of the photo that proved this a "roll-up" gate would affect the play on words in the title "Hollywood Roll" so I put them back in.
  • 4labs4labs Registered Users Posts: 2,089 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    Angelo I like the third one. I punched it up a bit. I hope you don't mind.
  • MitchellMitchell Registered Users Posts: 3,503 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    Angelo,

    I really like the punched up version of #3. Fits the challenge nicely and is an interesting subject.

    BTW, why no entry into the last challenge?

    mitch
  • rahmonsterrahmonster Registered Users Posts: 1,376 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    #3clap.gif
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  • devbobodevbobo Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 4,339 SmugMug Employee
    edited April 22, 2005
    Angelo,

    #3 all the way, in my book.

    Great work. thumb.gif


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  • photoshowphotoshow Registered Users Posts: 141 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    #3 is an intriguing image maybe a perspective with a little sharper angle would pull better and creat a disapearing point of sorts that might work a little better then the straight on perspective.


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  • digital faeriedigital faerie Registered Users Posts: 667 Major grins
    edited April 23, 2005
    4labs wrote:
    Angelo I like the third one. I punched it up a bit. I hope you don't mind.
    4labs, you read my mind! I like that better.

    this one's got my vote Angelo!!!! nice job! thumb.gif
  • FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited April 24, 2005
    Angelo wrote:
    Virginia - thanks for the input. Interesting point on #5. I originally did exactly that however I was concerned that losing the elements of the photo that proved this a "roll-up" gate would affect the play on words in the title "Hollywood Roll" so I put them back in.
    Oops. :uhoh I didn't "get" the significance of the title. In fact, I'm not sure what a "roll up" gate is. headscratch.gif But even knowning the reason for not cropping, I think I would like it better cropped. Whatever -- and even though maybe not your choice for this challenge -- I really like the picture. clap.gif

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  • SandySandy Registered Users Posts: 762 Major grins
    edited April 24, 2005
    #5 does it for me. There is definitely a pattern in the roll door. Then #3 makes for a great shot.
  • davevdavev Registered Users Posts: 3,118 Major grins
    edited April 24, 2005
    Yep, the gas meters. Best of the bunch.

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  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 24, 2005
    4labs wrote:
    Angelo I like the third one. I punched it up a bit. I hope you don't mind.
    That's good juicing Labby, thanks. If I copy your efforts I wonder if I still qualify for the challenge?
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 24, 2005
    Mitchell wrote:
    BTW, why no entry into the last challenge?

    mitch
    suffice to say i needed a break :):
  • 4labs4labs Registered Users Posts: 2,089 Major grins
    edited April 24, 2005
    Angelo wrote:
    That's good juicing Labby, thanks. If I copy your efforts I wonder if I still qualify for the challenge?
    I don't see why not Angelo..
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 25, 2005
    Flyinggina wrote:
    Oops. :uhoh I didn't "get" the significance of the title. In fact, I'm not sure what a "roll up" gate is. headscratch.gif But even knowning the reason for not cropping, I think I would like it better cropped. Whatever -- and even though maybe not your choice for this challenge -- I really like the picture. clap.gif

    Virginia
    Thanks again for your compliment. A rollup is a steel gate that covers a storefront window. You roll it up by pulling on the chain on the left of the photo.
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 25, 2005
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 25, 2005
    Prezwoodz wrote:
    I think number 1 or #3 best fit the spirit of the competition

    good shots
    Thank you.
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 25, 2005
    photoshow wrote:
    #3 is an intriguing image maybe a perspective with a little sharper angle would pull better and creat a disapearing point of sorts that might work a little better then the straight on perspective.


    I love shooting in downtown Hollywood, I have not been there for a walk around day in about 6 months. You images remind me it is time to do it again.
    Thanks but I tried several angles and came up with nothing better. These meters had garbage on both ends.
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 25, 2005
    Sandy wrote:
    #5 does it for me. There is definitely a pattern in the roll door. Then #3 makes for a great shot.
    thank you
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 25, 2005
    davev wrote:
    Yep, the gas meters. Best of the bunch.

    dave.
    thanks Dave. Seems it's a winner. Now I just have to punch it up as well as labby did. Thanks for looking.
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 25, 2005
    my attempt at Labs suggestion...
    any good?
  • SandySandy Registered Users Posts: 762 Major grins
    edited April 25, 2005
    Much better Angelo.
  • Lucky HackLucky Hack Registered Users Posts: 594 Major grins
    edited April 26, 2005
    Angelo wrote:
    any good?

    How did I miss your post? Man I must be slippin! Anyway, good to see ya back at it. "apt. 109" is a serious contender. And the punching the contrast really seals the deal IMO. Really great shot. I'm not having much luck so far, but I'm hoping that somehow I'll catch a break.

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