The first and especially the last are the most natural and beautiful, IMO.
2 is very nice, as well, I really like the reflection and the lighting on her.
I like where you were going with #3, and maybe it's her light hair but she blends in too much with the brightness of the image. Maybe underexposing the background and using flash to expose her would make her pop more.
4 and 5 just look too forced, she doesn't look relaxed or comfortable in either pose.
#6 is my absolute fave, I like that this doesn't feel like a "stock" senior photo, it reveals her personality and energy. Nice unconventional composition, as well. That one is just fantastic! I am shooting my first senior of the year in the morning, and I hope to come away with one as good as that!
The first and especially the last are the most natural and beautiful, IMO.
2 is very nice, as well, I really like the reflection and the lighting on her.
I like where you were going with #3, and maybe it's her light hair but she blends in too much with the brightness of the image. Maybe underexposing the background and using flash to expose her would make her pop more.
4 and 5 just look too forced, she doesn't look relaxed or comfortable in either pose.
#6 is my absolute fave, I like that this doesn't feel like a "stock" senior photo, it reveals her personality and energy. Nice unconventional composition, as well. That one is just fantastic! I am shooting my first senior of the year in the morning, and I hope to come away with one as good as that!
As I started scrolling down I knew #6 was the shot! Then I see Urbanaries response and agree on all shots. I'm also very glad you got her whole reflection in #2!
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I just want to say that I love how she has such cute, stylish clothes and yet she's not hanging out of them all over the place! I'm so tired of seniors who think that the less they wear, the more grown up they look.... Anyhow, great pictures! I LOVE the one by the train tracks & the reflection is great as well!
Very nice set, Deadeye! 1, 2 and 6 are my favorites. Your work is very clean. And, finally, a young lady who knows how to dress! Her clothes compliment her figure rather than amplify it.
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2 is very nice, as well, I really like the reflection and the lighting on her.
I like where you were going with #3, and maybe it's her light hair but she blends in too much with the brightness of the image. Maybe underexposing the background and using flash to expose her would make her pop more.
4 and 5 just look too forced, she doesn't look relaxed or comfortable in either pose.
#6 is my absolute fave, I like that this doesn't feel like a "stock" senior photo, it reveals her personality and energy. Nice unconventional composition, as well. That one is just fantastic! I am shooting my first senior of the year in the morning, and I hope to come away with one as good as that!
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As I started scrolling down I knew #6 was the shot! Then I see Urbanaries response and agree on all shots. I'm also very glad you got her whole reflection in #2!
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My compliments to her and you. Very well done!
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"Every guy has to have one weakness - and it might as well be a good one." - Shell Scott: Dance With the Dead by Richard S. Prather