37 Semperviren(critique please)

4labs4labs Registered Users Posts: 2,089 Major grins
edited April 28, 2005 in The Dgrin Challenges
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  • 4labs4labs Registered Users Posts: 2,089 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    another version
    20262125-L.jpg

    Another version
  • spocklingspockling Registered Users Posts: 369 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    #2 ALL the way.... thumb.gif
    Wouldn't change a thing!
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  • rahmonsterrahmonster Registered Users Posts: 1,376 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    #2...It has better colour, exposure and pattern than the first, Love it!thumb.gif
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  • Eric&SusanEric&Susan Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    spockling wrote:
    #2 ALL the way.... thumb.gif
    Wouldn't change a thing!


    15524779-Ti.gif Well done.clap.gifclap.gif

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  • gusgus Registered Users Posts: 16,209 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    I like 2 for sure but for me i would crop the top out & just have the plant alone.
  • devbobodevbobo Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 4,339 SmugMug Employee
    edited April 22, 2005
    #2 is great, I totally agree with gus on the cropping.

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  • 4labs4labs Registered Users Posts: 2,089 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    Thnxs for taking the time and commenting everyone. Here is another crop.

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  • KhaosKhaos Registered Users Posts: 2,435 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    Humungus wrote:
    I like 2 for sure but for me i would crop the top out & just have the plant alone.
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  • photoshowphotoshow Registered Users Posts: 141 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    I really like #2 as well, it is a great capture that really pulls the eye through the pattern. I would also crop out the top 2 rows.
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    so true gotta be #2
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  • gusgus Registered Users Posts: 16,209 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2005
    eek7.gif wow...the last time 2 or more people agreed with me it was about how much to set bail at.
  • digital faeriedigital faerie Registered Users Posts: 667 Major grins
    edited April 23, 2005
    Humungus wrote:
    eek7.gif wow...the last time 2 or more people agreed with me it was about how much to set bail at.
    Humungus :lol4

    yes, I agree with you, too, and seeing the cropped version I feel it is stronger. beautiful job 4labs!
  • PrezwoodzPrezwoodz Registered Users Posts: 1,147 Major grins
    edited April 23, 2005
    #2 is a great shot! Well Done~!
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  • SandySandy Registered Users Posts: 762 Major grins
    edited April 23, 2005
    #2 too!
  • Lucky HackLucky Hack Registered Users Posts: 594 Major grins
    edited April 23, 2005
    4labs wrote:
    Thnxs for taking the time and commenting everyone. Here is another crop.

    20279967-L.jpg

    Yup, that's the one! :D

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  • adrian_kadrian_k Registered Users Posts: 557 Major grins
    edited April 25, 2005
    ooh. that's good
    yeah, I like the tight crop best.
    Lucky Hack wrote:
    Yup, that's the one! :D

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  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited April 25, 2005
    I definitely like #2 also but I prefer the original, uncropped version. thumb.gif
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  • polmartpolmart Registered Users Posts: 3 Beginner grinner
    edited April 25, 2005
    As if you didn't hear it enough...


    #2 cropped
  • DoctorItDoctorIt Administrators Posts: 11,951 moderator
    edited April 25, 2005
    Humungus wrote:
    eek7.gif wow...the last time 2 or more people agreed with me it was about how much to set bail at.
    people agreed to set you a bail? rolleyes1.gif

    disagree there, agree with the photo thumb.gif



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  • PhotosbychuckPhotosbychuck Registered Users Posts: 1,239 Major grins
    edited April 26, 2005
    Hi, 4labs
    I have to agree also, I like the #2 cropped photo.
    I think it would be a good entry for the contest.thumb.gif
    I have not decided yet on what to shoot.

    Good Luck,
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  • Lucky HackLucky Hack Registered Users Posts: 594 Major grins
    edited April 26, 2005
    I definitely like the horizontal crop of this photo. Great macro!

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  • T4TotsT4Tots Registered Users Posts: 198 Major grins
    edited April 28, 2005
    #2 is just excellent, but I really like the uncropped version best. It seems to draw your eye more.
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  • snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited April 28, 2005
    Is this a preliminary vote on the challenge?rolleyes1.gif

    Well, I'll join in.
    I vote for No. 2 cropped. I just love it!clap.gifclap
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  • 4labs4labs Registered Users Posts: 2,089 Major grins
    edited April 28, 2005
    Thnxs everyone for your input. I think I will try and reshoot to get a sharper image. I lost alot with the crop.
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