Hey Andy, Have Any Suggestions?
Andy, I've seen you take decently composed shots taken in nondescript lighting, and transform them in Photoshop. Could you take a look at these?
I shot them in DC last weekend, in flat, grey light. I was wondering if you might have a suggestion for what they might ultimately become. You don't have to tell me how to get there, I can have fun trying to work that out for myself. What I'm sorely lacking is the vision. Any thoughts?
If so, thanks. If not, I know where you live.... :wink Pics link to the originals.
I shot them in DC last weekend, in flat, grey light. I was wondering if you might have a suggestion for what they might ultimately become. You don't have to tell me how to get there, I can have fun trying to work that out for myself. What I'm sorely lacking is the vision. Any thoughts?
If so, thanks. If not, I know where you live.... :wink Pics link to the originals.
Sid.
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i just downloaded the origs and i'll start messin with them.
back later
:andy
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here's your shot from the camera
1. so, i looked at it and the first thing that had to go was that horrid steel shed in front :puke1 :puke1 so i just cloned it out.
2.next, i noticed you were about 1 degree off of level so i fixed that (view>gridlines, select all, edit>free transform).
3. i copied the background layer and then did a b&w conversion (*)
4. add a layer mask and take away the b&w (restore the color) to the lovely cherry blossoms that frame the shot up top
5. i added a toning layer (**) of some morroccan mocha (dark brown) at about 22%, and used a layer mask to remove it from the upper part of the photo (the sky is nice and grey, so that works just fine).
6. in a separate layer i bumped the saturation of the cherry blossoms to about 40%, masking away the increased saturation for everything else
7. now i flattened but i wasn't quite happy yet so i made a layer copy and
8. added a two-tone color layer of violet on the upper part and some pink to the lower part. faded this (using opacity) alot, down to 25%. just a snidge really.
9. ok still not done - i needed to blur the blossoms a bit more. flatten and then copy the background again, create a layer mask, and filter>blur>gaussian blur at 1px (i was working on a 800x600px image, so on a fs image you'd need to blur maybe 4 or 5px -- to taste) then use the layer mask to brush away the blur on everything *but* the blossoms.
10. presto, switcho, we're done.
and for giggles, here's a version without step number 8
now, this was all done in about 10 minutes. to do this properly and really get the work done right around all those blossoms would probably take 30 minutes and wax - i love ya man but - hey, it's saturday night and i'm trying to um, to er...uh.. well dw is waiting for me
your thoughts? :andy
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Thanks Andy, your help is very much appreciated.
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intersting, and good!
i was going to suggest going the other way, shadowing the man and umbrella and highlighting the rest .... try that, could be good to?
i haven't had time to work on these other two. maybe tomorrow :andy
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I shall try that. And don't worry about working on the others... I just want to pick your talent, is all!
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Original -
My attempt -
I sharpened it (too much it appears now!)
Increased saturation in a mask then hid most, only keeping the blossoms.
Added a little color with about 40% opacitym again to the blossoms only.
Added a Gausian Blur level and masked out all but the blossoms again.
Not much differece. Hmmm, maybe I should have left well enough alone.
Hutch
Rutt, I personally like it very much. And I think your goal is different to Andy's work. Yours feels like it's still shooting for what might actually be there. Andy is interpreting the photo into something altogether different and aesthetically pleasing.
Both are winners in my book.
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I also take Andy's suggestion and make umbrella man mono, and the fountain color.
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you all are doing some great efforts here! very cool thread this is turnign out to be
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fine job on the main pic but i rather like the cloudy grey sky of the orig piccy in this case. just my taste..
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