Critique 2

blprophotoblprophoto Registered Users Posts: 9 Beginner grinner
edited August 20, 2008 in People
Another for your Critique

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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited August 20, 2008
    blprophoto wrote:
    Another for your Critique
    Sorry, missed the boat on the #1...

    I like the atmosphere, lighting and the choice of the location (I'm a huge sucker for forts/fortresses/dungeons/castles).

    Now to the part you were asking for:--)
    1) Framing is obviously not finished, prolly scheduled for CD cover format?
    2) Unless the gates mean something (is CD's title "Escape form the dungeons"?) it's more like a distraction than a constructive element. especially considering it's being highlighted
    3) The firing slit grows right from his head
    4) For some reason I'm longing for ever wider angle, closer distance and lower vantage point
    5) The big question remains: what a modern guy with an unplugged electric guitar doing in an inner court of some medieval military compound with no stage or even AC socket in the view...
    HTH
    "May the f/stop be with you!"
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