The shots are great and she's very lovely and these are certainly clean well composed shots.
I'd consider getting rid of the shadow under her eyelids on no. 6 though.
I would really like 6 and 7, but personally prefer cropping off the forehead to the chin in tight crops, as this also helps get the eyes away from the center. Just my $.02.
Gorgeous model and nice control of the high key situation. The red accessories and huge blue eyes really pop.
The shots are great and she's very lovely and these are certainly clean well composed shots.
I'd consider getting rid of the shadow under her eyelids on no. 6 though.
Thank you for the comments. I see what you are talking about on no.6 photo.
Thank you Urbanaries. I think 8, 4 & 5 are my favorite from this little set.
I would really like 6 and 7, but personally prefer cropping off the forehead to the chin in tight crops, as this also helps get the eyes away from the center. Just my $.02.
The chin cropped off bothers me also. I was too much concentrating on the eyes. Oh well, it is what it is ... can't change it since I took it that way ... not a crop. Live and learn. Thank you for the suggestion. Will try and remember that.
Gorgeous model and nice control of the high key situation. The red accessories and huge blue eyes really pop.
Thanks again. Admire your work so am excited to get your critique and encouragement.
What beautiful model you have. I like different poses, and a puppy shot is cute. I don't care for the crop on #6, however.
Good work!!
Thank you very much Shepsmom. I appreciate the comments and critique. We are in agreement on #6. I have some other tight crops, maybe I should post those.
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I'd consider getting rid of the shadow under her eyelids on no. 6 though.
2&7 because it's the glance to the camera. A nice natural laying with a glance or good head movement.
I would really like 6 and 7, but personally prefer cropping off the forehead to the chin in tight crops, as this also helps get the eyes away from the center. Just my $.02.
Gorgeous model and nice control of the high key situation. The red accessories and huge blue eyes really pop.
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Thank you for the comments. I see what you are talking about on no.6 photo.
Thank you. I agree.
Thank you Urbanaries. I think 8, 4 & 5 are my favorite from this little set.
The chin cropped off bothers me also. I was too much concentrating on the eyes. Oh well, it is what it is ... can't change it since I took it that way ... not a crop. Live and learn. Thank you for the suggestion. Will try and remember that.
Thanks again. Admire your work so am excited to get your critique and encouragement.
Thank you very much Shepsmom. I appreciate the comments and critique. We are in agreement on #6. I have some other tight crops, maybe I should post those.