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ginger_55
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This is not my usual thing................... any comments would help.
And I did it in black and white, also. ginger
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Then this AM, now, before coffee, I read the comments, then looked at the photos, backwards, black wand white first. Then I liked the black and white better.
Maybe it is which you see first. I left a note for my husband to look at them, and I told him to comment or die. He e-mailed me that he likes the black and white and gave me the reasons. That was helpful. He said that it brings up the contrast between the old and the new best (then he said pun intended, as that is what we call them here).
Thanks for stopping and helping. Gotta get some coffee. Don't know what time I went to bed. Not sure I should be up. 10 AM here
ginger
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Trying to get rid of the artifacts, or whatever one calls them.
If I choose the black and white, it will be because I think it
empasizes the bridges and not the clouds. Or that is what my daughter said in a very good critique.
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hoping this message finds you well -Ian
Am so confused. So tired again. Good thing we still have some time. Though, I do have that seminar, the one that was postponed last Sat. I should have a gazillion shots from that, but the emphasis is nature, don't know if I would get any repetitive patterns.
This is Sara's comment in her e-mail:
I like the color one best.
HOWEVER, the color one highlights the contrasts of the clouds as much (if not more sometimes) than the bridge. The black and white take the depths of the clouds away and makes the eye concentrate solely on the bridge.
You can look at the small wires in the background as an example. In the color they are barely noticeable. In the black and white the wires "pop" because they come through so black and so white.
Make sense?
So, for the sake of "what does my eye like?" it is the color because I like the clouds. For the sake of the art and the contest it is the black and white.
Great shots!!!!
love,
Sara
If anyone reads this again, what do you think about what Sara said.
ginger (she is from Charleston, and I think the black and white with the bridge emphasis may be a Charleston thing as we have a very sentimental feeling about these bridges)
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1. BW vs. Color... I'm neutral on this as this is not what troubles me with this image.
2. What the heck are those X's??? Are those the artifacts I see discussed above? One bigger one near the sun and the other one down below, looks reflected. I just don't get it. It distracts me from the patters in the bridge which is what I'm assuming you are emphasizing.
3. In your color shot, I'll $20 you used the shadow/highlight tool? It has the dreamy fake look. Sorry, not a fan. I get mad at myself for overusing S/H to do this to images.
4. You asked about the print too. Eh, you know where Rutt and I stand on that. Frames? who needs 'em.
5. This is after all a challenge shot, and by rough approx, 80% of the frame is sky. No pattern. Sure, the repetition is in the bridge, but unfortunately that's not even on the top 3 things I notice in this image (see above for those).
Don't take these comments the wrong way though, they are coming in the direction of the challenge. I think the image itself is cool, and would agree that a print of the BW version would be great. I may disagree on the old/new thing as the new bridge is really small and I'd have a hard time figuring it out without the print there (one reason I don't like print, gives it away).
There, how's that?
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Now my question is, If I took off the frame.......didn't use the highlight/shadow, no type..........went back to color.......uh, the color of the sky is weird and not pretty weird, kind of turquoise naturally, so with the sat tool, I nudged it to more blue............. and tossed the filter that makes those lines.............anyway...........would all that do good, or should I scrap it?
I don't understand the part about 80% of the frame being sky. Are the clouds not also pattern? That I don't understand and can't do much about. The rest, well, I will be back, and I will PM you, please look again after I redo.
I do have other bridge shots, but they have less pattern.
Thanks for looking an commenting, Eric,
ginger
One thing you might try: go extreme! Crop it tighter and up the heck out of the contrast. You'll lose all sub-detail in the bridge and be left with only the patters on top of the sky (which you can cast as you please).
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nice shot!! i like the color the best
Joe
As a challenge entry, I'm not so sure. Maybe a tighter crop of the bridge(s) emphasizing the crosspieces? I see the patterns and some repetition, but it's just no cohesive enough to me.
Still a cool shot, though!
Chris
The second B&W is too wishy-washy for my tastes.
The type's fine, don't worry about that unhappy lady's comments.
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Anyway, I finally figured out, OH, that is what they are talking about, and on which thread. I finally got too many threads going, just like times in the past.
I am telling you all. I had my first meal at 5:45. I was shooting eggs when I ran out of room on my Cf card. It was not going well.
Maybe it is because I am supposed to be on medication that I am supposed to take in the morning, but I have been on here since I woke up............or shooting eggs. But I can't take it anymore.
That photo, for better or worse, it would be good for a game at a party just to get differences of opinion, but I don't want any more of it, so it is out.
Hopefully I can just forget the whole thing. I cannot do challenges like I did in the past and do the other things I am involved in. Since this challenge started, I have been involved in almost every thread on the Shots forum. Every time I go out to shoot a challenge photo, I find something else. That may be good for me, but I am going to have to buy another hard drive if this keeps up. And I am talking about in addition to the external one I bought a while back.
I want to get a photo that EVERYONE just loves for this challenge. I want to do it right as Imax defined it and spend time on it. As I told someone else today, to do that everywhere on dgrin, I am going to have to hire an assistant.
For now I am through, and for here and ever after the bridge is through on this challenge.
I appreciate everyone's feedback. I asked for it and you all were kind enough to give it to me.
I really do appreciate that. But now I need to go take my Xanax and my Wellbutrin and my blood pressure medicine. And the others that are important to like my bones, but it is the Xanax I am really after.
Thanks, I do appreciate it,
ginger