Pure (im so bad in the studio)

ArvanArvan Registered Users Posts: 888 Major grins
edited August 28, 2008 in People
I took some shots for an old firend of mine and a friend of her today. I asked my firiend if i could borow his studio for some time.

The fact is...I had all the things in the world to make this session flawless..Well it didn´t happen! The lighting got the way the ladies wanted them..Just that the bakground din´t burn out bright white and smooth..Well..My tiny piece of crap LCD on the 20D said it was fine so i just pressed the trigger...When i now see the images..Dear lord im not happy! atleast they got sattisfied but for me??...GOTTA DO MY HOMEWORK!

This is the only one i wanted to work with..Think it turned out nice.

I used 3 Elinchrom D-lite 4, one with softbox and the 2 others with rasters ( is that right word?)

Anyways...I give to you people...Pure

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C&C and plz tell me anything..Pro or no, i post because i wan´t to learn!

Comments

  • Moogle PepperMoogle Pepper Registered Users Posts: 2,950 Major grins
    edited August 28, 2008
    If you can light up her left side of the face then.. thumb.gif

    It has that drawing art feel to it, at least to me, and that is really cool!
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  • ladytxladytx Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited August 28, 2008
    I love the photo, think high key is what its called, but her right eye is too dark. Other than that it's great. Let us see some more. My photos always look better on the lcd on my camera than they do on my computer! Maddening!!
    LadyTX
  • ArvanArvan Registered Users Posts: 888 Major grins
    edited August 28, 2008
    Yepp..right eye is way to dark..Have to fix that somehow...More pics are on the way..Now i need some sleep 1:30 pm in sweden.

    Thanx for writing.
  • FlutistFlutist Registered Users Posts: 704 Major grins
    edited August 28, 2008
    Yeah, fix that right eye and it's a winner, nice job
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