Kaitlin

rhommel

Here's Kaitlin from Elite Model Management Toronto

ShepsMom

Nice work, beautiful model, love the sharpness of the shots.

Nikolai

Nice series...
Cute model, too:-)

I say her facial expression could use a bit more variety (guilty myself:-)
I'm also not a big fan of first two BW conversions, they seem a bit bland to my taste.
I also would like to see a different lighting pattern.

The major nit - she seems very uncertain, and I say it's your fault as a photographer/director (unless you were going for that uncertainty). All her poses except the last one are half-baked. You need to tell your models to make bolder moves, otherwise camera doesn't take it right.

Hope to see more soon!

dlplumer

I love and respect Nik's work, but I really like the first two images

Dan:D

rhommel

Nikolai wrote:

Nice series...
Cute model, too:-)

I say her facial expression could use a bit more variety (guilty myself:-)
I'm also not a big fan of first two BW conversions, they seem a bit bland to my taste.
I also would like to see a different lighting pattern.

The major nit - she seems very uncertain, and I say it's your fault as a photographer/director (unless you were going for that uncertainty). All her poses except the last one are half-baked. You need to tell your models to make bolder moves, otherwise camera doesn't take it right.

Hope to see more soon!

lol

thanks for the critique nik!

rhommel

dlplumer wrote:

I love and respect Nik's work, but I really like the first two images

Dan:D

thanks dlplumer...photography is subjective.. can't please everyone