Beautiful bike and I like the ideas you have for composition. In your first, the blue stair really detracts from the subject. Perhaps selective color or a blurred background would help more? The second shot seems to be over-sharpened and again, the bg is a significant part of the picture.
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Shay.
First nice bike.....
Second, if the bike is the subject it should occupy more real estate
Third, the building in #1 could be interesting without the bike
My .02