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NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
edited September 13, 2008 in Go Figure
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  • urbanariesurbanaries Registered Users Posts: 2,690 Major grins
    edited September 10, 2008
    Love the colors and the energy. Great texture in the brick and background exposure.

    I would prefer the silhouette be in focus and not the background. Not sure about the car being in the shot, it dates the image for me.
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  • Scott_QuierScott_Quier Registered Users Posts: 6,524 Major grins
    edited September 10, 2008
    urbanaries wrote:
    Love the colors and the energy. Great texture in the brick and background exposure.

    I would prefer the silhouette be in focus and not the background. Not sure about the car being in the shot, it dates the image for me.
    Gotta agree with all this. In addition, (and there's no PC way of saing this:D) I think I would clone out that bright spot between her legs. To my mind, it's a very strong detractor (or attention attractor) that, I think, takes away from the strength of the image.
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 10, 2008
    Thanks, guys! I see what I can do tonight..mwink.gif
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    Better? mwink.gif

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  • Scott_QuierScott_Quier Registered Users Posts: 6,524 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    Nikolai wrote:
    Better? mwink.gif
    Yes, I think it is better.
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  • GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    Nik, I really, really like this. I didn't mind the bright spot between her legs, the car is ok gone but I would be equally happy with it there, but I really think the light at the top needs to go. Once that's cropped, it totally draws the girl in as the focal point. But you know, if you listen to everyone, you may end up with everything other than her armpit cropped! rolleyes1.gif
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  • Moogle PepperMoogle Pepper Registered Users Posts: 2,950 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    I like the second one over the first with the car cropped out. But I can't help but wonder about the pose. Is she sniffing her new deodorant? Or scent?
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    Moogle Pepper wrote:
    I like the second one over the first with the car cropped out. But I can't help but wonder about the pose. Is she sniffing her new deodorant? Or scent?
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  • cj99sicj99si Registered Users Posts: 880 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    I like the new crop, but miss the light through the skirt.
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    cj99si wrote:
    I like the new crop, but miss the light through the skirt.
    Thank you! thumb.gif
    I guess another iteration is in order tonight...mwink.gifrolleyes1.gif
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  • DavidTODavidTO Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 19,160 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    Nik, I don't mean to be flippant, but it looks to me like she's checking to see if her deodorant is still working. ne_nau.gif
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    DavidTO wrote:
    Nik, I don't mean to be flippant, but it looks to me like she's checking to see if her deodorant is still working. ne_nau.gif
    I guess you and Ted are in agreement then mwink.gif
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  • AgnieszkaAgnieszka Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,263 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    Love the colors ... where was that taken? It somehow reminds me of Europe ...
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  • DavidTODavidTO Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 19,160 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    Nikolai wrote:
    I guess you and Ted are in agreement then mwink.gif


    Except Ted apparently does a better job of reading than I do! :D
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2008
    Agnieszka wrote:
    Love the colors ... where was that taken? It somehow reminds me of Europe ...
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2008
    Hope 3d time is a charm mwink.gif

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  • Scott_QuierScott_Quier Registered Users Posts: 6,524 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2008
    And .... the 3rd time's the charm. I think this is the winner!thumb.gif
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2008
    Scott_Quier wrote:
    And .... the 3rd time's the charm. I think this is the winner!thumb.gif
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    As my dad used to say "perseverence and effort alway win over talent and intelligence in the long run". It looks like I have enough of the first two:-) mwink.gif
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  • GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2008
    Scott_Quier wrote:
    And .... the 3rd time's the charm. I think this is the winner!thumb.gif

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  • PaulThomasMcKeePaulThomasMcKee Registered Users Posts: 429 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2008
    I agree with the others that this third version is super! the only nit pic i have left is that the light between her skirt doesn't appear as authentic as in the very first version - maybe a blend of the first and third versions at that location would work.

    Nice shot Nik! How long are you in Seattle for?
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    Thanks, Paul, Scott and Emily!
    PaulThomasMcKee wrote:
    I agree with the others that this third version is super! the only nit pic i have left is that the light between her skirt doesn't appear as authentic as in the very first version - maybe a blend of the first and third versions at that location would work.

    Nice shot Nik! How long are you in Seattle for?
    I was only there for a day, I was on a business trip and arrived one day earlier. I'm back to SoCal now :-)
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