Grain Elevators

agunther

I sort of like this, but I have my doubts about the composition (lots of sky). I'd love to hear some thoughts on this:

(from my Boise Gallery)

Darren Troy C

I like this alot! ....however, I think you meant to say "G-r-a-i-n" elevators.

agunther

Idlewild wrote:

I like this alot! ....however, I think you meant to say "G-r-a-i-n" elevators.

Yeah, and I really wanted to post it to the whipping post section. Not sure what happened. Coffee didn't work this morning

Richard

agunther wrote:

Yeah, and I really wanted to post it to the whipping post section. Not sure what happened. Coffee didn't work this morning

Actually, I moved it to Landscapes. Special rules apply in the Whipping Post The WP is for shots that you are totally happy with, which didn't seem to be the case. I fixed the title, though.

I like this shot. The color and composition are good. I especially like proportions of sky, buildings and grass, but think you need to lower the brightness of the sky to bring out some more detail there and maybe add hint of storm menace.

Arvan

keep the sky..It does the shot!

agunther

Richard wrote:

Actually, I moved it to Landscapes. Special rules apply in the Whipping Post The WP is for shots that you are totally happy with, which didn't seem to be the case. I fixed the title, though.

I like this shot. The color and composition are good. I especially like proportions of sky, buildings and grass, but think you need to lower the brightness of the sky to bring out some more detail there and maybe add hint of storm menace.

Ah. So I am not losing my mind I always considered the whipping post as something to learn from.
Thanks for fixing the title and thank you very much for your opinion. I enjoy constructive feedback.