My 2 daughters ..

WildWallyWildWally Registered Users Posts: 494 Major grins
edited September 19, 2008 in People
Have been trying more portraits lately .
On the second shot , I don't usually take shots straight-on , but thought the pose fit her personality ..
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Any comments/suggestions welcome ...
"Walt":stud
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Comments

  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited September 19, 2008
    Hey Walt. Magenta is ruling both these shots especially the first. The processing is not doing your daughters justice. The first has way too much skin treatment without removing/correcting blemishes. You'll see by the whites of her eyes that cyan is present, hence not color balanced.

    The second is better but the pose is just a bit much with her head back..seeing up her nostrils a bit. I think with a rework of these in post you may find them much more pleasing.
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  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited September 19, 2008
    I agree with swartzy on both picture
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