Julia (7 img)
Yuri Pautov
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So, after receiving your answers (Thank you so much for them!) I continue posting some portraits (more can be found at my site). Though I'll try to post less photos (I'd like 5 to be my norm!), sometimes I cant stop and ...
Hope they look different..
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Here I used interesting (for me) background and different clothes of 'model' Julia.
Of course, I'd like more shallow DOF here, but that's all what Sony R1 could give me in this situation...
Spasibo,
Yuri
Hope they look different..
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Here I used interesting (for me) background and different clothes of 'model' Julia.
Of course, I'd like more shallow DOF here, but that's all what Sony R1 could give me in this situation...
Spasibo,
Yuri
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In order of preference!
1, 5, 7, 6, 3, 4, 2
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In all the rest she looks very tense. :cry
#3 seems a bit too tightly cropped on top, unlike the rest
#1 and #4 are rather bland PP-wise, IMHO
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Nice photos-- here are some suggestions. In #1, the way her feet are positioned is sort of strange. I think that turning her right foot so the toes are pointing more to camera left would look more natural.
Also, go for more of an "s-curve" in terms of full-body posing. Get her body in more of an S shape (tip her head, throw out a hip, bend a knee) rather than straight up and down. Look at almost any magazine or painting with models-- you'll instantly know what I'm talking about if you draw an "S" on their bodies.
Lovely, lovely model though and your work is definitely showing progress. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for posting the series.
Take Care,
Chuck
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